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[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Notebook Poems,year two
[time] => 2003-05-20 04:05:00
[hometext] => First post;very early,and possibly the most creative/productive of my days as an aspiring writer.Thanx in advance for feedback/response.
[bodytext] => The Opening
___________ the days spill into years,but I can vaguely recall.... the remarkable colors become permanent,indegenous,inspirational The very concept of innocence makes this all worthwhile and tolerable in the end these raging phosphorous blades srapnelling the tiny skull. ~distant voic es ~ smiles,tears a strange overpowering general sense of jubilation invasion of searing hot-white life into once liquid lungs the opening of perfect Infantile iris' the opening wide of Mother's embrace wide-open,the remembrance of that pacifying smile ~~~~~~~ Circles ______ Are we born again yet? Are you alive,then? All the adulation seems to be about breaking thru this Timeless mystery pentrating this holy silence Are you still w/me? Are we born again now? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 51 [informant] => OrionsFate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
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