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Array ( [sid] => 17834 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Because Of You [time] => 2003-05-20 00:05:00 [hometext] => Basically blaming someone for my death. [bodytext] => when i die i want you to remember this face
so it will haunt you forever
i want this moment to last forever for you
and for you to need forget what you did to me
as for everyone else you've hurt
i'll let them speak their mind with words
and not my death
i want you to be at my funeral
i want you to see all of the people that were affected by this
no one can blame me, but they can blame you
your decision created a disaster and wasted a life
all because your a prejudistic w****
who never appreciated s***
die with my face in your mind
visions of my death more plain and clear then a television screen
if words could kill this wouldn't be suicide but murder
you would have killed me that day you told me i cant have her
all my life i looked for someone to be there to spend my life with
your daughter was that person
and you took her away
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 43 [informant] => regret_nothing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Because Of You

Contributed by regret_nothing on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

when i die i want you to remember this face
so it will haunt you forever
i want this moment to last forever for you
and for you to need forget what you did to me
as for everyone else you've hurt
i'll let them speak their mind with words
and not my death
i want you to be at my funeral
i want you to see all of the people that were affected by this
no one can blame me, but they can blame you
your decision created a disaster and wasted a life
all because your a prejudistic w****
who never appreciated s***
die with my face in your mind
visions of my death more plain and clear then a television screen
if words could kill this wouldn't be suicide but murder
you would have killed me that day you told me i cant have her
all my life i looked for someone to be there to spend my life with
your daughter was that person
and you took her away

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Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 01:00:11 AM AEST
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Nice! I like the ending, I wan't expecting you to balme the parent (s). Good write, I liked it a lot!

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