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Array ( [sid] => 178090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free Radicals [time] => 2014-04-03 19:14:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When will it ever be enough?
How would you feel if life passed you by?
Not one ounce has any substance
And because of your reluctance
This occurrence
Has happened

How long have you been waiting for the sunrise ?
How long ago did light disappear from your eyes ?
Over many years
Your personality has solidified
Your essence has unified
Floating components
Free thoughts in the skies
Surprise
Here it goes again
How often
It depends
Friends remain friends
Lovers turn on each other in contentious ends
Send me a letter
Of your latest endeavors
And I'll see what I can recommend
Take my advice
Loose the sunglasses
The night is a game of pretend

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Free Radicals

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 07:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

When will it ever be enough?
How would you feel if life passed you by?
Not one ounce has any substance
And because of your reluctance
This occurrence
Has happened

How long have you been waiting for the sunrise ?
How long ago did light disappear from your eyes ?
Over many years
Your personality has solidified
Your essence has unified
Floating components
Free thoughts in the skies
Surprise
Here it goes again
How often
It depends
Friends remain friends
Lovers turn on each other in contentious ends
Send me a letter
Of your latest endeavors
And I'll see what I can recommend
Take my advice
Loose the sunglasses
The night is a game of pretend

------
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Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2014-04-03 19:14:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Free Radicals (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:48:18 PM AEST
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an interesting write, great expression
of feelings, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Free Radicals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th September 2014 @ 12:08:27 AM AEST
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Hydroxyl radical
HO:>)
one only one Hydrogen short of
a water molecule

Moses Gomberg, father of radical chemistry

Hydroxyl radicals are highly reactive
And consequently short-lived

Macrophages generate this compound when exposed
to certain pathogens
Yeah bacteria
Nay, but good bacteria
in the gut

You write about someone you know
however

so it would be hard for strangers to
understand

the door the sun the temperature
a test tube perhaps
/ but the style is there
but readers are subject
in the subjunctive clause

I used to wake early on XMAS day
hoping to see the subjunctive clause
And ask, am I on some list
you made up all by yourself,
And, considering your age, do you feel trapped

Peace!

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