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Array ( [sid] => 177748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Rites [time] => 2014-02-09 12:55:36 [hometext] => Just playing around with rhymes and slinging one liners. I enjoy incorporating a 'duel' aspect into my work at times. And this piece, plus Labyrinth, are my responses to a friend's work that he 'served' me. Great fun, and yes, we get along! ;) [bodytext] => I told you, I'm sicker
My knee-jerk is quicker

Use my machete and pull down your chest like a zipper
Bloody, exposing your ticker, just call me Jane Ripper

Your pleas don't concern me in the least
With knife and fork I'm ready to feast

With a smirk I gaze upon your fearful eyes
Put some tape on your mouth to stifle the cries

You wanted me to be the Bonnie to your Clyde
I'll dress in red- your blood- now come and kiss the bride

What is your last wish? For death to come slow, or come quick
Your response was muffled- say goodbye now- 3, 2... *CLICK*.
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Last Rites

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 12:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I told you, I'm sicker
My knee-jerk is quicker

Use my machete and pull down your chest like a zipper
Bloody, exposing your ticker, just call me Jane Ripper

Your pleas don't concern me in the least
With knife and fork I'm ready to feast

With a smirk I gaze upon your fearful eyes
Put some tape on your mouth to stifle the cries

You wanted me to be the Bonnie to your Clyde
I'll dress in red- your blood- now come and kiss the bride

What is your last wish? For death to come slow, or come quick
Your response was muffled- say goodbye now- 3, 2... *CLICK*.




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Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 02:15:51 PM AEST
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Impressive how far you have come as a writer. I wish I had a little bit of your talent.

Great write


Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 02:18:55 PM AEST
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A great piece of work.
fun is good.
Smiles, blessings,
emy


Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 10:45:19 PM AEST
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Geeze, Jane, you've come a long way since May 30 2005 where the bunny part on Cimba turned your stomach. Pulling down chest zippers with a machete? Holy *****!!!

Graphic, awesome clever and witty. A most enjoyable read.


Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 01:52:08 AM AEST
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love the way this flows


Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 01:16:50 PM AEST
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creepy, raw and eww lol! i am soooooo happy
we are the bestest best bestie friends in the
whole wide world...........

hugs n' love nessa:)


Re: Last Rites (User Rating: 1 )
by JaileneRose on Friday, 25th July 2014 @ 12:14:32 AM AEST
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haha I loved it




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