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My heart is warm with you around
Im happy, more than anyone can be
My life is better with you I've found

We used to play
The sun was hot and high
I saw you every single day
I wasnt ready to say goodbye

The ball went very far
You ran with speed like a plane
I know you didnt see the car
I was overwhelmed with pain

What was laughter became tears
Pleas for god to fix you
In an instant god took away years
Without you i didnt know what to do

Later I have problems accepting you were taken
I stoped believing and I threw away everything I might of had
I rejected faith a new feeling of loss had awakened
No longer did I have to be mad

I still see you sometimes
Maybe in a different setting
one thats not happy, sadness is a ring that frequently chimes
I am making it with you gone
I have a lot of love to give
I realized I was no longer getting

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Shadow of an Idea

Contributed by ScribereHabeo on Tuesday, 23rd July 2013 @ 03:55:07 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



The house is small because youre here with me
My heart is warm with you around
Im happy, more than anyone can be
My life is better with you I've found

We used to play
The sun was hot and high
I saw you every single day
I wasnt ready to say goodbye

The ball went very far
You ran with speed like a plane
I know you didnt see the car
I was overwhelmed with pain

What was laughter became tears
Pleas for god to fix you
In an instant god took away years
Without you i didnt know what to do

Later I have problems accepting you were taken
I stoped believing and I threw away everything I might of had
I rejected faith a new feeling of loss had awakened
No longer did I have to be mad

I still see you sometimes
Maybe in a different setting
one thats not happy, sadness is a ring that frequently chimes
I am making it with you gone
I have a lot of love to give
I realized I was no longer getting





Copyright © ScribereHabeo ... [ 2013-07-23 15:55:07]
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Re: Shadow of an Idea (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 23rd July 2013 @ 11:39:58 PM AEST
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It is very sad but beautifully written.
Blessings,
emy


Re: Shadow of an Idea (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 02:21:06 PM AEST
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WoW. I'm a single parent although I have a girl friend that helps me raise my daughter. She is 7 going on 8. I can't begin to imagine your pain. I know I would just whither away if anything happened to my BB. Beautiful write God bless

Greetings
Rus


Re: Shadow of an Idea (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 10:20:47 PM AEST
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It hurts to lose someone we love, I feel your pain




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