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her comfort
leaves me breathless

this monster
beside me

inside me

her scent
still serenades
the air

an untamed
paradise of my
favorite poison

a moisturizing malice
so unclean it
seems holy.

she's a cold habit

as she sleeps

her wicked side
settles

fists float

fallacy is forgotten
and
for just a few minutes

i remember why I love her
~n~

how many different ways
i could kill her

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She's a cold habit

Contributed by Devilish1 on Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 12:12:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

as she sleeps

her comfort
leaves me breathless

this monster
beside me

inside me

her scent
still serenades
the air

an untamed
paradise of my
favorite poison

a moisturizing malice
so unclean it
seems holy.

she's a cold habit

as she sleeps

her wicked side
settles

fists float

fallacy is forgotten
and
for just a few minutes

i remember why I love her
~n~

how many different ways
i could kill her

as she sleeps

Copyright © Devilish1 ... [ 2013-04-29 12:12:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by TheTimmy56666 on Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 02:22:46 PM AEST
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Very nice and deep.

Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST
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excellent write: You express the idea that
desire is always subject to the inner demons
very well

Richard

Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 08:10:25 AM AEST
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The darkness witnessed on the revelation of some aspects of human nature can be the most scary just on realisation. We unwittingly tread fine lines and the most painful......I remember why I love her........expressive and poignant write.

Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 08:39:52 PM AEST
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Nice work! It certainly conveys the scene and the mood. Blessings, SF

Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 4th May 2013 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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deep and intensely dark.. its awesome!! great job

Jennittude

Re: She's a cold habit (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 10:46:53 AM AEST
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Oooh. Juicy lines and thought process. Love the honesty in this piece, and the way you laid it out is perfect.

~Scorp

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