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Array ( [sid] => 175701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Steve [time] => 2013-04-10 09:07:42 [hometext] => Not even barely a dent in describing how I feel about this person but I'm sure you will all know what I am talking about after reading. [bodytext] => I stand tall and stubborn with my back turned to my blurry past
For me there is no need, no need of looking back
The sheer wonderment of our future flashes before my eyes so fast
I am finally on the right track
I should probably be surprised, or shocked
But I believe in the unexpected
Because it happens to me a lot
This critical condition that you have me in
so movingly sweet and blissfully sublime
It’s to love or let die
Nothing is ever out of line
No reason for questions of why
Love just is...that's all there is to it
I look into your smouldering eyes of blue...
...I see a seriousness of a burning love so true
Love thrives, cuts like a deadly steel knife
And spreads like wildfire
You are the answer to my life
The portal to my every desire
when you're away I can’t breathe
I wither away like a flower at the end of summer
A reason to leave...
... this world, would be no Steve
every second you are away, my body grows number
you are so powerfully deep in my aching soul
Buried in the center of everything that is myself
I only need you to make me whole
you cut me and I bleed a million words of our love
I feel I’m on cloud 9, up and above
I will never let anything keep us apart
I stand guard over us
This feeling runs through my veins with a majestic art
I need you more than air
I love you far more than I care to compare
one touch from you will nurse me to health
How can I ever be sure you are real
I ask myself
This man that changes everything in my life, I feel
should I, could I, will I and do I?
The answer everything my love, can you guess?
YES!
I will always be sure, I have never been so sure of anything
My heart dances and leaps
Every time it hears you sing
And my mind never wants to go to sleep
Loving you until the end of our days
To the end of the world and beyond
I have no cares for what anyone says
If I could I would make all others disappear with a wave of a wand
And when finally the world does end
You and I hand in hand would watch, standing immortal
My eternal lover and friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => scarlett-indigo [notes] => Spelling corrected per request. To maintain the correct comment to poem ratio, please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. Thank you. Moderator_18 Apr 10, 2013 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
My Steve

Contributed by scarlett-indigo on Wednesday, 10th April 2013 @ 09:07:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I stand tall and stubborn with my back turned to my blurry past
For me there is no need, no need of looking back
The sheer wonderment of our future flashes before my eyes so fast
I am finally on the right track
I should probably be surprised, or shocked
But I believe in the unexpected
Because it happens to me a lot
This critical condition that you have me in
so movingly sweet and blissfully sublime
It’s to love or let die
Nothing is ever out of line
No reason for questions of why
Love just is...that's all there is to it
I look into your smouldering eyes of blue...
...I see a seriousness of a burning love so true
Love thrives, cuts like a deadly steel knife
And spreads like wildfire
You are the answer to my life
The portal to my every desire
when you're away I can’t breathe
I wither away like a flower at the end of summer
A reason to leave...
... this world, would be no Steve
every second you are away, my body grows number
you are so powerfully deep in my aching soul
Buried in the center of everything that is myself
I only need you to make me whole
you cut me and I bleed a million words of our love
I feel I’m on cloud 9, up and above
I will never let anything keep us apart
I stand guard over us
This feeling runs through my veins with a majestic art
I need you more than air
I love you far more than I care to compare
one touch from you will nurse me to health
How can I ever be sure you are real
I ask myself
This man that changes everything in my life, I feel
should I, could I, will I and do I?
The answer everything my love, can you guess?
YES!
I will always be sure, I have never been so sure of anything
My heart dances and leaps
Every time it hears you sing
And my mind never wants to go to sleep
Loving you until the end of our days
To the end of the world and beyond
I have no cares for what anyone says
If I could I would make all others disappear with a wave of a wand
And when finally the world does end
You and I hand in hand would watch, standing immortal
My eternal lover and friend




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Re: My Steve (User Rating: 1 )
by Jigget on Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 04:40:03 AM AEST
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scarlett, as i type this, tear tracks cool on my surprised cheeks. i'd almost rather believe you aren't real, for if you are, having whatever INCREDIBLE LUCK you have to be allowed to Love so perfectly gives you a favored status among the Living and the Dead. "This feeling runs through my veins with a majestic art" (excellent, just a top-notch sentence.) If you would, please read my poem called Would You?, would you? thank you. jigg


Re: My Steve (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Friday, 12th April 2013 @ 11:38:12 PM AEST
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Mmm.. beautiful praise and a beautiful love. Hope it bodes well for you. If poetry could only really win a heart.... but it takes more than that. Blessings, SF


Re: My Steve (User Rating: 1 )
by Wordsmith123 on Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 12:04:38 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful and raw. At one point, I found myself holding my breath and not realizing it until I had to breath. There is something in the passion of this poem on which I can't seem to place my finger, but that taps into a new level of emotion. I applaud your ability to verbalize such bare feeling.




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