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Array ( [sid] => 1755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Love Poem [time] => 2002-08-05 06:14:45 [hometext] => Repost [bodytext] => My toy
you are an open door
and I see everything you can become
I can become we will become together
like shoelaces or velcro or sunshine and cut grass
like paper valentines be mine. This is why....

You understand my tempest fits
with silent solidarity riding out the foul weather
like broken dreams. Like ivy you are ever green. Here
to soothe my soul in subtle ways without condition pure
you listen and lace me with affection when I want to be
spoiled spinning with security what I want to hear
you try so hard. I feel it in you when I can't let go.
I won't let you go.

Sweetheart, Honey, Angel
candy-coated terms of endearment
carmelize on my hot tongue
and you are mine
my friend and lover
in my hands
my toy. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 589 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Patricia_Petro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A Love Poem

Contributed by Patricia_Petro on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 06:14:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My toy
you are an open door
and I see everything you can become
I can become we will become together
like shoelaces or velcro or sunshine and cut grass
like paper valentines be mine. This is why....

You understand my tempest fits
with silent solidarity riding out the foul weather
like broken dreams. Like ivy you are ever green. Here
to soothe my soul in subtle ways without condition pure
you listen and lace me with affection when I want to be
spoiled spinning with security what I want to hear
you try so hard. I feel it in you when I can't let go.
I won't let you go.

Sweetheart, Honey, Angel
candy-coated terms of endearment
carmelize on my hot tongue
and you are mine
my friend and lover
in my hands
my toy.

Copyright © Patricia_Petro ... [ 2002-08-05 06:14:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:42:08 AM AEST
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It would be hard to forget this beautiful love poem Patricia ...it has stuck in my mind from the first time I read it.
Chrissie x

Re: A Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:13:44 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful :)

Re: A Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by vahtang on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:29:15 AM AEST
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