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[sid] => 175198
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Submerged (Pt 1)
[time] => 2013-02-20 17:22:32
[hometext] => Hi, this is a semi-first draft of a poem I have entitled Submerged. It is going to be pretty long, so I just decided to break it up into 3 different parts. Hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading...please give as much constructive feedback as possible! :-) (
[bodytext] => Sinking. Thinking. Yet, not blinking. So surreal. Soul elevating to the sky, long enough for God to say, "hi". A body submerged 10ft under water. A mother about to lose her daughter. But, God wasn't done. Sinking. Thinking. Still, not blinking. Heaven is winking and she made it to the ground. Over six years ago, I was about to drown but, God saved me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 87 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Tarheel_treat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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