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You and me and me and you
We can watch the noon light
as it twists into moonlight
And we can watch the artificial stars
As they flicker and conduct the choir
And dance to the rhythm of our heart
And then I'll sweep you off your feet

We can talk awhile and take it slow
We can talk awhile, give into time's flow
I've written songs and written words
About a girl I've never met
Then there was that red dress, you had it on
And all I could hear was "Babylon"
So, I'm letting go of my head and heart
In hopes of knowing what could start

Suddenly, I find the stars aligned
And I'm missing nothing I've left behind [comments] => 4 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

For the Girl in the Cafe

Contributed by stalkee on Monday, 28th January 2013 @ 02:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Why don't you come a little closer?
You and me and me and you
We can watch the noon light
as it twists into moonlight
And we can watch the artificial stars
As they flicker and conduct the choir
And dance to the rhythm of our heart
And then I'll sweep you off your feet

We can talk awhile and take it slow
We can talk awhile, give into time's flow
I've written songs and written words
About a girl I've never met
Then there was that red dress, you had it on
And all I could hear was "Babylon"
So, I'm letting go of my head and heart
In hopes of knowing what could start

Suddenly, I find the stars aligned
And I'm missing nothing I've left behind

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2013-01-28 02:11:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: For the Girl in the Cafe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th January 2013 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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You should show her this! It's great!

Tim

Re: For the Girl in the Cafe (User Rating: 1 )
by ElementZero on Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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Great job on the poem. It's a really good poem, that definitely could get the girl. Ask her out!

Re: For the Girl in the Cafe (User Rating: 1 )
by LetYourFeelingsOut on Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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Ask her out bud this peomcould melt anyone's heart your definaaly gonna be able to get her with this .......Show her this or read it to her in person shell fall for you in a heart beat ..your such a thoughtful person I can tell we woman need more men like you in this world Goood luck I hope it works out for you to and remember if it doesn't I'm sure some other lucky girl will be glad to :3 or you'll end up being great friends :) Love the prom keep up the good work !!!

Re: For the Girl in the Cafe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 01:14:41 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, hugs n' love nessa

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