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Array ( [sid] => 174568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Half of Me [time] => 2012-12-19 05:59:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My passion sits beneath a stone
A place where I can't go
For death has come to half of me
With one half dying slow

How cruel is death to take my heart?
But yet it lets me breathe
It came between the two of us
And it will not let me leave

Half of me has forsaken life
It lays out in a field
The other half will not let go
It simply will not yield

I pray for death to come my way
Each day on her behalf
But death can't see how much I miss
My beloved second half?

My passion sits beneath a stone
Where one day I will be
I can't be whole until I'm back
With the other half of me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Whiskurz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Half of Me

Contributed by Whiskurz on Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 05:59:37 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My passion sits beneath a stone
A place where I can't go
For death has come to half of me
With one half dying slow

How cruel is death to take my heart?
But yet it lets me breathe
It came between the two of us
And it will not let me leave

Half of me has forsaken life
It lays out in a field
The other half will not let go
It simply will not yield

I pray for death to come my way
Each day on her behalf
But death can't see how much I miss
My beloved second half?

My passion sits beneath a stone
Where one day I will be
I can't be whole until I'm back
With the other half of me

Copyright © Whiskurz ... [ 2012-12-19 05:59:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Half of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
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A very interesting way of expressing loss and broken heart. Very nicely written. I like it.

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Re: Half of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Thursday, 20th December 2012 @ 02:20:31 AM AEST
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Great rhythm and great writing all around. Such a sad piece, but very well spoken. I enjoyed reading this.

-Everette

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