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Array ( [sid] => 174122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is It Wrong [time] => 2012-10-27 19:37:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Is it wrong? That I hate you?
For everything you did and still do?
Sorry...I guess I'm still sad
Over all the things we could've had

Is it wrong? That I still love you as well?
I remember all the times you called me Kel...
And how I only let you call me that
But now that you're gone...I feel like crap

I hope you know I'm sorry for all I've done
You should be apologizing because you're the one
The one...I can't stop thinking about
And it makes me want to shout

I know we're no longer on speaking terms
But every day we don't talk my stomach twists & turns
I can't help but wonder if you think of me
Because I think about you more then I need

Thinking of you makes me want to cry
But I hold my tears back...well...at least I try
I learned from others...I've got to stay strong
but I still love you...Is it wrong? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 350 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kelseigh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Is It Wrong

Contributed by Kelseigh on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Is it wrong? That I hate you?
For everything you did and still do?
Sorry...I guess I'm still sad
Over all the things we could've had

Is it wrong? That I still love you as well?
I remember all the times you called me Kel...
And how I only let you call me that
But now that you're gone...I feel like crap

I hope you know I'm sorry for all I've done
You should be apologizing because you're the one
The one...I can't stop thinking about
And it makes me want to shout

I know we're no longer on speaking terms
But every day we don't talk my stomach twists & turns
I can't help but wonder if you think of me
Because I think about you more then I need

Thinking of you makes me want to cry
But I hold my tears back...well...at least I try
I learned from others...I've got to stay strong
but I still love you...Is it wrong?




Copyright © Kelseigh ... [ 2012-10-27 19:37:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:49:42 PM AEST
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Very nice piece of writing and feelings very well played. Sometimes we get so mad at others although hate is such a strong word. But the love we carry inside and our hearts on our sleeves, will always outshine and outdo any hurt that comes our way.


Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by NikaShortyyCakeFolsom on Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 12:23:21 AM AEST
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well said my friend well said


Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Facade on Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 01:19:05 AM AEST
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Nice write. A lost love is an open wound.


Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by ValDohren on Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 07:40:32 AM AEST
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To lose love is always heartbreaking, but we usually get over it in time - nice write, well penned.


Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by LetYourFeelingsOut on Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 11:19:26 AM AEST
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Very well done this brought back memories for me :)


Re: Is It Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by OptimisticPessimist on Saturday, 23rd February 2013 @ 08:51:59 AM AEST
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Hey, babe :) told you I would comment. So who is this about?

Anyway...this was so captivating and heart-tugging that I just wanted to go over there and hug you until you weren't feeling this way anymore. Meh...love you, Girly!

-V




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