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Array ( [sid] => 173592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Hidden, I'm Broken. [time] => 2012-08-12 23:43:32 [hometext] => Witten for a Male friend, first proper song that i've wrote. [bodytext] => Verse:
As no words come to mind
Page blank, mind over time
See me or see through me.
Do you really know the real me?( Oohhhh…….)
Weakness in the mind, strength that over comes.
I’ll fly, I’ll rise I’ll become the person you need oh.
Overcome my fears then I’ll be set free.
Do you know me? know the real me.

Chorus:

I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken.

Verse:

I’m here in a world that no one understands.
The fear, the anger all is too much.
I’m scared; I know I’m not alone.
To keep her safe is all I want.
In my arms is where she belongs,
Never let her go, she is my world.
(guitar for a bit)
No one sees, yet no one hears
I’m not the kid you think I am.
Hidden, broken, torn up inside.
I’m empty, nothing left but her.
Never understood, I’m still stuck in my home hood.

Chorus:

I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken.

Verse:

I’m not gon give up myself,
I’m not gon let her down,
I’m gonna be the man, that I know I can be
I’m gonna fight for myself,
I know i can win this fight.
Don’t give up, Don’t give up on me.
Cause crying for help, And i know you’r out there somewhere.
I’m gonna find myself and the person Iam!

Chorus:

Cus I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 34 [informant] => LauranHyde [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
I'm Hidden, I'm Broken.

Contributed by LauranHyde on Sunday, 12th August 2012 @ 11:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Verse:
As no words come to mind
Page blank, mind over time
See me or see through me.
Do you really know the real me?( Oohhhh…….)
Weakness in the mind, strength that over comes.
I’ll fly, I’ll rise I’ll become the person you need oh.
Overcome my fears then I’ll be set free.
Do you know me? know the real me.

Chorus:

I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken.

Verse:

I’m here in a world that no one understands.
The fear, the anger all is too much.
I’m scared; I know I’m not alone.
To keep her safe is all I want.
In my arms is where she belongs,
Never let her go, she is my world.
(guitar for a bit)
No one sees, yet no one hears
I’m not the kid you think I am.
Hidden, broken, torn up inside.
I’m empty, nothing left but her.
Never understood, I’m still stuck in my home hood.

Chorus:

I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken.

Verse:

I’m not gon give up myself,
I’m not gon let her down,
I’m gonna be the man, that I know I can be
I’m gonna fight for myself,
I know i can win this fight.
Don’t give up, Don’t give up on me.
Cause crying for help, And i know you’r out there somewhere.
I’m gonna find myself and the person Iam!

Chorus:

Cus I’m hidden.
I’m broken.
Can you see me?
Can you feel my pain, see my fear?
I’m lying here crying, tears are falling.
Do see me? do you feel me?
I’m breaking, I’m fading.
I shout for help but no one hears.
I’m hidden.
I’m broken




Copyright © LauranHyde ... [ 2012-08-12 23:43:32]
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Re: I'm Hidden, I'm Broken. (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 12:37:43 AM AEST
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Love the lyrics, they flow very well and make me really want to hear the music that goes with them.

You've definitely got lyrical talent.




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