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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Raven
[time] => 2012-07-11 19:14:54
[hometext] => Our poetry group, tried an exercise where we reference another poets work & incorporate it into our poetry. This is my lame efforts.
[bodytext] => I first saw those black eyes of yours Many, many years ago When I was childishly young Dreaming big & never letting go. Though time has escaped me I’ve still seen you many times then since Reminding me of every dream I had & how you had me convinced! That sharp blade beak of yours Pointing at my veins Waiting for me to give in & bleed a bloody rain Your wings never once did they ever hold nor support me Instead they flapped inside my head Plunging dreams to nothing faithfully Making me feel like I was dead You thing of evil, be it bird or devil Summoned in the unforgotten volumes of mr edgar allan poe Convince to destroy me; you leave me with no hope here & then once again …you go... Im free! My mind is tricked into thinking, Free to dream, to hope & to explore But yet, once again old treacherous friend You hop upon my chamber door. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 100 [topic] => 43 [informant] => cordier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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