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where the green grass grows
my thoughts are free to wonder
where nobody ever goes

my imagination can create
anything I want to see
no matter the design
it belongs to only me

the mind creates the image
the image creates the way
to turn your picture into words
the ones you want to say

eveyone has a different
picture in there mind
I believe no two are the same
by our own design

we create what we want to see
the image is our own
although we share what we visualize
to the things we've always known

so as I lay here in the valley
my mind becomes a kit
the only meaning of this
is to take another hit
the hot shot poet
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the valley of the mind

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 10:03:06 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

as I lay here in the valley
where the green grass grows
my thoughts are free to wonder
where nobody ever goes

my imagination can create
anything I want to see
no matter the design
it belongs to only me

the mind creates the image
the image creates the way
to turn your picture into words
the ones you want to say

eveyone has a different
picture in there mind
I believe no two are the same
by our own design

we create what we want to see
the image is our own
although we share what we visualize
to the things we've always known

so as I lay here in the valley
my mind becomes a kit
the only meaning of this
is to take another hit
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-05-19 10:03:06]
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Re: the valley of the mind (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 11:18:38 AM AEST
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A very nice flow, thanks for posting it.

Re: the valley of the mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Raggie on Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 02:04:58 AM AEST
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Nice one. Drew me to picture myself sat pondering in a wooded glade:)

Re: the valley of the mind (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 06:13:28 AM AEST
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nice write imagination makes the poet more expressive. Atop the montain it has its flow
And down the valley it will futher go. this is imagination

Re: the valley of the mind (User Rating: 1 )
by dojo1970 on Sunday, 20th May 2012 @ 09:47:20 AM AEST
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The mind is the most creative device on this planet. It's amazing what we can dream up even if it's just fantasy. Great work.

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