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[aid] => mick
[title] => HAD I KNOWN
[time] => 2012-04-23 22:29:52
[hometext] => This is one is a true story.
[bodytext] => She thought no one would find
The poison that took you away.
You thought she luved you.
Oh Lord, crime don't pay.
Had I known what she'd do
I never would have left you.
2 1/2 million for your life.
The heifer cremated you too.
When the law found her
she was dieing.
Extradition was useless, a shame.
The same evil got back around.
Didn't even get to spend it she
was so lame.
My heart bleeds for your children,
Especially our little Paul, so young then.
We've reconnected a luv that don't fall.
She was never your friend.
This one for my step son Paul.
Yoothamom luvs you.
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[counter] => 834
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HAD I KNOWN
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 10:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She thought no one would find
The poison that took you away.
You thought she luved you.
Oh Lord, crime don't pay.
Had I known what she'd do
I never would have left you.
2 1/2 million for your life.
The heifer cremated you too.
When the law found her
she was dieing.
Extradition was useless, a shame.
The same evil got back around.
Didn't even get to spend it she
was so lame.
My heart bleeds for your children,
Especially our little Paul, so young then.
We've reconnected a luv that don't fall.
She was never your friend.
This one for my step son Paul.
Yoothamom luvs you.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2012-04-23 22:29:52]
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 10:43:12 PM AEST
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| :'-( Oh, Emy. I'm sorry for this. |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 12:19:50 AM AEST
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A sting falls on my heart while reading this Emy. So heartbreaking and so sorry:(
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by spud on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 07:09:34 AM AEST
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Hi Emy,
A touching tribute. Very sorry for your loss.
Tommy
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 10:30:14 AM AEST
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Oh Emy!
So much pain and sufferig coming to you. He sends you so much because your endurance will crown you as a queen and
His eye apple.
All my love
Elizabeth |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 11:20:30 AM AEST
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| Even in situations that are dark you can find love, hope and peace. These things can heal all the pain and hurt that malicious people cause. ( At first I thought you were speaking of another gruesome happening where a young 7 year old was mutilated and cremated. Though my heart is sad for you I am glad that is not the story) |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 09:53:03 PM AEST
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Sweet Emy ~
I just have ....
no words.
So sorry to learn of this. :(
Take care ; be safe my dear friend
~ B |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by desciple on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 10:17:36 PM AEST
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| Sometimes from tragedy, come great stories of triumph and the will to live. Pain is what makes us who we are today. Without the side paths one takes, we wouldn't have character..great write, keep writing!! |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 03:40:51 PM AEST
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Oh Emystar - this so sad. My heart goes out to you having so much to undergo.
Throw this care and sorrow too on the Lord. to reap the benefit for enduring so much grief.
Luv, hugs and blessings
Elizabeth. |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 10:08:24 AM AEST
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| A sad poem. Hope things get better. |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by TCK on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 09:11:53 PM AEST
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This is really sad. So sorry for your loss. Please keep writing- poetry can be a channel for expression, and your poems are beautiful. Also, there is a God who loves even through the storms and who watches over children. Please know this.
TCK |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 06:20:53 PM AEST
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| deep and beautiful, very sombre, dont quite know its true meaning and depth but fealt its significance and power none the less, absolutely stunning, it touched me deeply even tho i dont know exactly why,,, greatx |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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I am always so late
everyone says
what I might have said
anyway
good write
great flow
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 22nd September 2012 @ 01:51:31 PM AEST
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emystar,
you still write from your heart
very moving write.you are truely a true friend.
i hope all is well with you. |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Friday, 16th November 2012 @ 10:16:42 AM AEST
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| Very sad and full of meaning very good wite :) |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th December 2012 @ 11:04:21 PM AEST
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| So interesting
The words that create the image of a women
betraying a man
or is it a soul who has lost it mate
and has a burden carry
and stares into the sky in wait |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by colinb on
Thursday, 7th February 2013 @ 07:46:48 PM AEST
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| You really reached into the deepest of my heart & soul with this Emy |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by ScribereHabeo on
Thursday, 18th April 2013 @ 03:15:23 PM AEST
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Very sad, not like you have heard that a lot though
regret is a very hard emotion to deal with,wish you the best of luck.... Z.D |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by Sommer on
Saturday, 25th May 2013 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST
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| Gave me chills. |
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Re: HAD I KNOWN
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 04:09:55 PM AEST
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oh emy sweetie this is heartbreaking! i'm so sorry for your loss!
big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->------- |
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