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Array ( [sid] => 172027 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Vampyr~ [time] => 2012-04-19 19:10:49 [hometext] => More vampiric verses. [bodytext] => ~***~
We ,
Vampyr... ,
wicked teeth ,
watch from shadow
of whispering woods.
Drawn close , closer Cherie
Ears caressed ; venomous words.
Embrace ; wrap you in shadow webs ,
drink from rivers of blood-veined desire ,
leave you cold... cold in beds... beds of autumn leaves.

Dead..
Above
the cold moon
swimming in stars.
Your eyes are white orbs
staring far , seeing naught
but cold , eternal shadow.
No! Such beauty given to ruin?
Come back my love. I see that you are
far to exquisite , to lovely for death.
~***~
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 13 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~Vampyr~

Contributed by doug on Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 07:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

~***~
We ,
Vampyr... ,
wicked teeth ,
watch from shadow
of whispering woods.
Drawn close , closer Cherie
Ears caressed ; venomous words.
Embrace ; wrap you in shadow webs ,
drink from rivers of blood-veined desire ,
leave you cold... cold in beds... beds of autumn leaves.

Dead..
Above
the cold moon
swimming in stars.
Your eyes are white orbs
staring far , seeing naught
but cold , eternal shadow.
No! Such beauty given to ruin?
Come back my love. I see that you are
far to exquisite , to lovely for death.
~***~

Copyright © doug ... [ 2012-04-19 19:10:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Vampyr~ (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 07:22:11 PM AEST
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Very well written, dark, deep. I like the style of your work. Flows smoothly...great write

Re: ~Vampyr~ (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 09:08:59 PM AEST
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very dark and mysterious,, very well written, great work

Re: ~Vampyr~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 02:02:23 AM AEST
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This is filled with mystery I loved it. More!!

and..... why the hell is there spam in your comments that is wrong. Spammer get off this poem!

sorry had to rip em lol there is no place for this lol.

Michelle

Re: ~Vampyr~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 11:37:22 AM AEST
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one word - exquisite

Dark, beautiful, haunting and yes, romantic. I know
I'm sounding like a broken record here, but you have such
skill and aplomb when it comes to writes like these. And
I find it so completely inspiring. If I can ever muster the
imagination and nerve, I might try my hand at something
like this. ;)

Chillingly passionate ~

~ Breezy

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