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Array ( [sid] => 171968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => suicide [time] => 2012-04-16 21:11:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => there are in this worl unblessed souls,
who's sarrows all create joy for others,
the one's who once had early hopes now lay in the grave,
with many tears and heartbroken mothers,
for those souls are the seed in wich spring flowers grow,
they give hope to ones who wish to do better than recent actions show,
these souls died for reasons in wich we do not know,
but there death showed us the path in which we should go,
the reason of suicide is unclear to me,
but that laziness showed by no trying,
proved that dead was all they could be,
they gave up too early,
fled beautiful lives too quick,
that very lack of compassion makes me sick,
life should be cherished,
not trashed and treated unbold,
life is a mystery,
a challenge you have to live to unfold,
dont take it for granted,
dont throw it away,
live youre life like a tree in the wind,
let it sway,
suicide is selfish,
ungrateful and cold,
you not only take you're life,
but you break the bonds you withold.
~BraveHeart<3
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suicide

Contributed by braveheart on Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 09:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

there are in this worl unblessed souls,
who's sarrows all create joy for others,
the one's who once had early hopes now lay in the grave,
with many tears and heartbroken mothers,
for those souls are the seed in wich spring flowers grow,
they give hope to ones who wish to do better than recent actions show,
these souls died for reasons in wich we do not know,
but there death showed us the path in which we should go,
the reason of suicide is unclear to me,
but that laziness showed by no trying,
proved that dead was all they could be,
they gave up too early,
fled beautiful lives too quick,
that very lack of compassion makes me sick,
life should be cherished,
not trashed and treated unbold,
life is a mystery,
a challenge you have to live to unfold,
dont take it for granted,
dont throw it away,
live youre life like a tree in the wind,
let it sway,
suicide is selfish,
ungrateful and cold,
you not only take you're life,
but you break the bonds you withold.
~BraveHeart<3

Copyright © braveheart ... [ 2012-04-16 21:11:44]
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Re: suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 11:29:22 PM AEST
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Braveheart your description of suicide is excellent.
Both, stupidity and selfishness that gives the precious gift of life a kick in the rear as you well said.
Congratulation for giving it its right name.
Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 06:33:56 AM AEST
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great read ariel
daddy loves you
the hot shot poet

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