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Array ( [sid] => 169757 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Turns Out [time] => 2011-12-30 00:14:20 [hometext] => Feedback Please, read other poem if you enjoy this one [bodytext] => I used to think it was you I was in love with,

That you would be the one I marry and have my kids with,

That our love would never stop growing like a chia,

Turns out you were just in love with the idea.

Everyone thought we were perfect for each other,

That we were set to forever be together,

That our love was as beautiful as a peacocks feather,

Turns out you got someone else that you find better.

You are the most important thing to me, like the last puzzle piece,

Our hearts would beat as one and would never cease,

Your love flowed through me easier then the air I breathe,

Turns out you don't feel the same way and decided to leave. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sdeezy17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Turns Out

Contributed by sdeezy17 on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 12:14:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I used to think it was you I was in love with,

That you would be the one I marry and have my kids with,

That our love would never stop growing like a chia,

Turns out you were just in love with the idea.

Everyone thought we were perfect for each other,

That we were set to forever be together,

That our love was as beautiful as a peacocks feather,

Turns out you got someone else that you find better.

You are the most important thing to me, like the last puzzle piece,

Our hearts would beat as one and would never cease,

Your love flowed through me easier then the air I breathe,

Turns out you don't feel the same way and decided to leave.

Copyright © sdeezy17 ... [ 2011-12-30 00:14:20]
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Re: Turns Out (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 12:52:43 AM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
If you want comments, you need to comment on others.
blessings,
emy

Re: Turns Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 03:17:31 AM AEST
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I agree with emystar! Keep on writing,
but reading and commenting on others
works is the best way to build friendships
here in this sharing community of writers.
Welcome to the club.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

Re: Turns Out (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 04:06:21 AM AEST
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It's a good write. I like the smooth flow and the natural rhymes.
Ammar

Re: Turns Out (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 06:52:50 AM AEST
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Love never departs its only the lovers. I love the love upon my lover and the love from my lover. my lover never departs me.

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