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Array ( [sid] => 169739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Grave Release [time] => 2011-12-29 10:21:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Staving off, sweet pain
the gentle creatures of our nature, dance like burning candle light.
A poison from the lips, potent lust and dying inhibitions.
Is it our nature to live for death?
Is it our nature to feed of one another's breath?
This is a blackness.
So tell my why, closure of flesh is so addictive?
I stole the blackness from your soul.
You bathed in the darkness of my riot.

This was the night we died.
Nobody missed us.
Our funeral, unvisited.
Nobody mourned us.
Even though, our death was so beautiful.
This was the night we died.
Now we walked separated.

We are the living dead.
Feasting on flesh of strangers.
Never satisfied, I need your flesh alone.

Mocking away, sweet loneliness.
The murderous monsters of our nature, serenaded the apocalypse of hate.
A venom from your womb, tainting innocence of day dreams.
Is it our nature to suicide, using body shots?
Is it our nature to homicide one another?
This is a massacre.
So tell my why, closure of flesh is so adductive?
I stole the light from your heart.
You bathed in the blood of my love.

This was the night we died.
Our eulogy, never spoken.
The graves of our moment reveal, Epitaphs unwritten.
Though, our life was so beautiful.
This was the night we died.
Now in love purgatory we roost.

We are the living dead.
Feasting on flesh of strangers.
Never satisfied, I need your flesh alone.

I want to be buried with you, in love's cemetery again.
Let our ashes to spill together, Until heaven forbids.
I want to die again with you, my living dead lover.
Let this night we died, not be our ending.
I long for your flesh, your poisonous kiss, your venomous womb.
Let me live dying with you again.
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Grave Release

Contributed by Daniel_L_Bamberg on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 10:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Staving off, sweet pain
the gentle creatures of our nature, dance like burning candle light.
A poison from the lips, potent lust and dying inhibitions.
Is it our nature to live for death?
Is it our nature to feed of one another's breath?
This is a blackness.
So tell my why, closure of flesh is so addictive?
I stole the blackness from your soul.
You bathed in the darkness of my riot.

This was the night we died.
Nobody missed us.
Our funeral, unvisited.
Nobody mourned us.
Even though, our death was so beautiful.
This was the night we died.
Now we walked separated.

We are the living dead.
Feasting on flesh of strangers.
Never satisfied, I need your flesh alone.

Mocking away, sweet loneliness.
The murderous monsters of our nature, serenaded the apocalypse of hate.
A venom from your womb, tainting innocence of day dreams.
Is it our nature to suicide, using body shots?
Is it our nature to homicide one another?
This is a massacre.
So tell my why, closure of flesh is so adductive?
I stole the light from your heart.
You bathed in the blood of my love.

This was the night we died.
Our eulogy, never spoken.
The graves of our moment reveal, Epitaphs unwritten.
Though, our life was so beautiful.
This was the night we died.
Now in love purgatory we roost.

We are the living dead.
Feasting on flesh of strangers.
Never satisfied, I need your flesh alone.

I want to be buried with you, in love's cemetery again.
Let our ashes to spill together, Until heaven forbids.
I want to die again with you, my living dead lover.
Let this night we died, not be our ending.
I long for your flesh, your poisonous kiss, your venomous womb.
Let me live dying with you again.




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Re: Grave Release (User Rating: 1 )
by maverick47 on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 11:39:42 AM AEST
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Outstanding piece. A masterful use of words. My last true love was the only persom who came to mind. Her and I shared this fate. We ran into each other several years ago and it began to get physical within 15 mjn of finding a private area. She stopped out of nowhere. Her words were, " I can't do this. It is still there and I don't want to lose it again," She is now in a safe relationship with a 9-5 guy who loves her. I really don't blame her. Thanks for bringing that all back to mind.


Re: Grave Release (User Rating: 1 )
by BritVent on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 07:51:10 PM AEST
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This is amazing


Re: Grave Release (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 07:02:56 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh beautiful in its intensity my friend.

Michelle

who now has chills


Re: Grave Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 02:32:04 PM AEST
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Deep (no not the grave...even though it may have been I am not knowing of this information).

Questions, pondering, questions, no answers, questions, philosopher oh poetry.

Finally... VAMPYRES.


Tim




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