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Array ( [sid] => 169638 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My First [time] => 2011-12-25 14:30:12 [hometext] => nothing to describe it.. [bodytext] => The dreams of you that tell i care for you,
but i can never seem to tell you..
It has always been that man who swept me off my feet,
but suddenly i'm feeling beat..
My best friend and you..
All I say is what do I do?
I can't blame her for liking you,
nor can I blame you but suddenly I feel I don't know you,
You drift from me
leaving me though not free,
You were my first, my only,
now you have left me lonely,
I want to cry but I'm too strong for that,
I say I'm fine with that,
Knowing you don't understand
how much you hurt me, hoping for my savior from this water i'm drowning, land.
That time, my first,
was definitely my curse.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 75 [informant] => krissy26 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

My First

Contributed by krissy26 on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 02:30:12 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

The dreams of you that tell i care for you,
but i can never seem to tell you..
It has always been that man who swept me off my feet,
but suddenly i'm feeling beat..
My best friend and you..
All I say is what do I do?
I can't blame her for liking you,
nor can I blame you but suddenly I feel I don't know you,
You drift from me
leaving me though not free,
You were my first, my only,
now you have left me lonely,
I want to cry but I'm too strong for that,
I say I'm fine with that,
Knowing you don't understand
how much you hurt me, hoping for my savior from this water i'm drowning, land.
That time, my first,
was definitely my curse..

Copyright © krissy26 ... [ 2011-12-25 14:30:12]
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Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by Anara on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 02:47:34 PM AEST
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This is so sad and touching. Beautifully written. Truly amazing

Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 03:02:49 PM AEST
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I had a similar thing happen to me. She was my first and It was a 2.5 year relationship. I definitely cried though... not that I am proud of that. I actually wrote the very first poem on here about how it broke and remade me.

Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 05:02:16 PM AEST
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i understand you completely in this poem. i love this poem. its like reading a good book. i loved it that much. keep writing.

Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by krissy26 on Saturday, 14th April 2012 @ 02:46:38 PM AEST
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In many of my poems I recite best friend when it means a girl close to me. As in, they were my friends.

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