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I think how far can her back bend.
She has done so much I wonder what have I done to deserve her touch.
She gives my heart a rush making her my wife is a must.
Amber I am talking to you.
Three years strong who would have knew.
I love you so freaking much without you im a lost pup and your a diamond in the rough.
Im a dull needle in a haystack and your a luxurious lady like a pink maybach.
So lay back and your pains let me take that.
I will do everything I can for you to keep me as your man.
I am the one that will love your forever.
Your the best and no one can do it better.
Even through stormy weather you keep me strong your gentel like a feather.
Amber you are the one and without you my life would be no fun.
For you I will do anything under the sun [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 2 [informant] => GREAT-WHITE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Diamond In The Rough

Contributed by GREAT-WHITE on Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 05:26:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She is with me untill the end.
I think how far can her back bend.
She has done so much I wonder what have I done to deserve her touch.
She gives my heart a rush making her my wife is a must.
Amber I am talking to you.
Three years strong who would have knew.
I love you so freaking much without you im a lost pup and your a diamond in the rough.
Im a dull needle in a haystack and your a luxurious lady like a pink maybach.
So lay back and your pains let me take that.
I will do everything I can for you to keep me as your man.
I am the one that will love your forever.
Your the best and no one can do it better.
Even through stormy weather you keep me strong your gentel like a feather.
Amber you are the one and without you my life would be no fun.
For you I will do anything under the sun

Copyright © GREAT-WHITE ... [ 2011-12-14 17:26:09]
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Re: Diamond In The Rough (User Rating: 1 )
by angelus8663 on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 01:18:26 AM AEST
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for someone who doesn't like to write love poetry, this is very good. You've spoken from your heart and im sure she's gonna love it.

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