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Array ( [sid] => 169235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im Lost And Cant Be found [time] => 2011-12-12 13:01:54 [hometext] => This is something I wrote when I was going through hard times [bodytext] => You can take this as my suicide note.
Or take it as a rhyme thats pretty dope.
Im almost done tying the rope and im starting to lose all hope.
I dont ever express my feelings so youll never see me mope.
Some people might even take this as a joke.
My life was never really clear and I can now see that the bridge is near.
Theres nothing to fear as I realize my end is here.
Standing in the mirror wanting to attack what I see.
Looking and wanting to scream untill my throat bleeds.
I dont know what to do I have no leads.
Duck tape my nose and mouth so I cant breath.
On your poetry.com reading your poems that make me happy.
But then I wake up back to my thoughts wishing I had no feelings like robots.
So I smoke my feelings untill my eyes are bloodshot.
Staring at the clock wondering when is my time going to stop.
Theres my finish line go ahead and outline me in white chalk.
Lay me in my new bed and lower me into the ground.
Finally I dont have to listen to the sounds of all the frowns and stop hiding behind the tears of a clown.
Now I am lost forever and I will never be found [comments] => 3 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 36 [informant] => GREAT-WHITE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Im Lost And Cant Be found

Contributed by GREAT-WHITE on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 01:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You can take this as my suicide note.
Or take it as a rhyme thats pretty dope.
Im almost done tying the rope and im starting to lose all hope.
I dont ever express my feelings so youll never see me mope.
Some people might even take this as a joke.
My life was never really clear and I can now see that the bridge is near.
Theres nothing to fear as I realize my end is here.
Standing in the mirror wanting to attack what I see.
Looking and wanting to scream untill my throat bleeds.
I dont know what to do I have no leads.
Duck tape my nose and mouth so I cant breath.
On your poetry.com reading your poems that make me happy.
But then I wake up back to my thoughts wishing I had no feelings like robots.
So I smoke my feelings untill my eyes are bloodshot.
Staring at the clock wondering when is my time going to stop.
Theres my finish line go ahead and outline me in white chalk.
Lay me in my new bed and lower me into the ground.
Finally I dont have to listen to the sounds of all the frowns and stop hiding behind the tears of a clown.
Now I am lost forever and I will never be found




Copyright © GREAT-WHITE ... [ 2011-12-12 13:01:54]
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Re: Im Lost And Cant Be found (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 02:34:35 PM AEST
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Re- title this Lost and Finally FOUND!
So glad you worked through this
depressing issue! All poets go through
these stages occasionally. It's where the
art comes from, our hearts!
Blessings,
(Robert Edgar Burns)
Rob


Re: Im Lost And Cant Be found (User Rating: 1 )
by Damian on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 03:02:32 AM AEST
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We have all been there mate.
Much respect for sharing, it makes it easier.


Re: Im Lost And Cant Be found (User Rating: 1 )
by JimKoz on Tuesday, 10th December 2013 @ 11:52:36 PM AEST
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Great piece here. Though these are my favorite lines.-"There's my finish line go ahead and outline me in white chalk. Lay me in my new bed and lower me into the ground."




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