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gets killed without even learning the word goodbye
little one got killed
maybe hes up in heaven thinking if he was even alive
life to short to remember
6months old
i dont even remember the first day that i crawled at 7
how can liitle one remember when he died
he probably thinks he never left heaven

(how can someone kill a baby)

we all know when were born
but never when we die
9months and we down
by the time we get down
its just a tiking clock waiting for your time
to be out
to be done in a blink of an eye
without time to shout
how can someone do this to aliitle sprout of life
why did little one have to die
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liitle one

Contributed by lyricalpoet on Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 09:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I dont understand how someone could kill a baby
gets killed without even learning the word goodbye
little one got killed
maybe hes up in heaven thinking if he was even alive
life to short to remember
6months old
i dont even remember the first day that i crawled at 7
how can liitle one remember when he died
he probably thinks he never left heaven

(how can someone kill a baby)

we all know when were born
but never when we die
9months and we down
by the time we get down
its just a tiking clock waiting for your time
to be out
to be done in a blink of an eye
without time to shout
how can someone do this to aliitle sprout of life
why did little one have to die

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Re: liitle one (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 05:33:20 PM AEST
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This a very touching write.
I've often wondered the same thing.
You did an awesome job with this write.
Blessings,
emy

Re: liitle one (User Rating: 1 )
by Shanz33 on Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 07:45:46 AM AEST
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Well written..you can be proud.

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