Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 03-June 06:13:47 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 168233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Imprisoned [time] => 2011-10-31 03:31:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No one understands

The extent of this suffering

That between gritted teeth I face every day

With an inner self which is bluffing

And shouts at me to let it away

I smother it like you would a fire

That’s destroying all that’s left

As my soul searches for answers

But there is nothing I can say

Theses daemons that never existed

Have come to take it away

And the inner peace I once dreamed of

Is now a dead body in decay.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 32 [informant] => pep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Imprisoned

Contributed by pep on Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 03:31:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



No one understands

The extent of this suffering

That between gritted teeth I face every day

With an inner self which is bluffing

And shouts at me to let it away

I smother it like you would a fire

That’s destroying all that’s left

As my soul searches for answers

But there is nothing I can say

Theses daemons that never existed

Have come to take it away

And the inner peace I once dreamed of

Is now a dead body in decay.




Copyright © pep ... [ 2011-10-31 03:31:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Imprisoned (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 04:26:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Welcome to YPDC.
Very sad but great writing.
Just keep writing, that helps.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Imprisoned (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetToLearn on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 03:08:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a great, sad, poem. I would say I understand how you feel, but I know that when I'm sad I hate it when people say they understand.

So. Great poetry, sad reason, beautiful rythym.


Re: Imprisoned (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetToLearn on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 03:08:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
And plus. One of the lines is "Noone understands"


Re: Imprisoned (User Rating: 1 )
by pep on Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 03:16:25 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Why Is it "Noone" I don't get it...




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com