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Array ( [sid] => 167874 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => O Utopia, Utopia, wherefore art thou Utopia? [time] => 2011-10-16 02:35:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have searched long and hard, trying to find that place
where peace and serenity, in our world may yet grace
a chance to meet a dream come true, if only for a few
where pain and suffering are gone, and will never renew

Then I realized, this Utopia I seek, on a map will not be found
still an undiscovered world, whose contemplation will confound
finding some comfort, the thought of my soul ascending on high
no longer to be troubled, suffering on earth never again to decry

A world exists but not for the living, to experience this garden of delight
a place where the happiness of life's dreams, will satiate your appetite
where fear and worries cease, hope and desire now become your reality
trials and tribulations throughout life, ending with that long awaited finality

Maybe Utopia really does exists, but only with extreme effort can you hope to say, it you have acquired
but most people refuse to commit, unwilling to put in the time and effort that is unquestionably required
how mistaken we often are, thinking we can still remain happy, giving up by settling for that much less
only up to the point we are once again challenged, and our daily events again cause us all of our stress

To understand why so many people never seem to be satisfied, no matter what they have, it is never enough
first we must acknowledge the answer might be found in the lies people believe, but most of them are a bluff
Utopia must be an invention of the mind, convincing itself that feelings of joy and happiness are close at hand
seemingly it might then be prudent to maintain this self-deception, since this is what our egos really demand

Although it has been stated time and again that Utopia does not and can not exist, yet we still continue to dream
coming to teach us this great lesson in human psychology, how much for happiness' sake, we're willing to scheme
yet we can take note to the fact that despite our varying differences, the human condition remains constant in us all
our primary need for true happiness is why we can rest assured, this invisible Utopia we will forever continue to recall [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 2bpositive [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
O Utopia, Utopia, wherefore art thou Utopia?

Contributed by 2bpositive on Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 02:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I have searched long and hard, trying to find that place
where peace and serenity, in our world may yet grace
a chance to meet a dream come true, if only for a few
where pain and suffering are gone, and will never renew

Then I realized, this Utopia I seek, on a map will not be found
still an undiscovered world, whose contemplation will confound
finding some comfort, the thought of my soul ascending on high
no longer to be troubled, suffering on earth never again to decry

A world exists but not for the living, to experience this garden of delight
a place where the happiness of life's dreams, will satiate your appetite
where fear and worries cease, hope and desire now become your reality
trials and tribulations throughout life, ending with that long awaited finality

Maybe Utopia really does exists, but only with extreme effort can you hope to say, it you have acquired
but most people refuse to commit, unwilling to put in the time and effort that is unquestionably required
how mistaken we often are, thinking we can still remain happy, giving up by settling for that much less
only up to the point we are once again challenged, and our daily events again cause us all of our stress

To understand why so many people never seem to be satisfied, no matter what they have, it is never enough
first we must acknowledge the answer might be found in the lies people believe, but most of them are a bluff
Utopia must be an invention of the mind, convincing itself that feelings of joy and happiness are close at hand
seemingly it might then be prudent to maintain this self-deception, since this is what our egos really demand

Although it has been stated time and again that Utopia does not and can not exist, yet we still continue to dream
coming to teach us this great lesson in human psychology, how much for happiness' sake, we're willing to scheme
yet we can take note to the fact that despite our varying differences, the human condition remains constant in us all
our primary need for true happiness is why we can rest assured, this invisible Utopia we will forever continue to recall




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Re: O Utopia, Utopia, wherefore art thou Utopia? (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 04:38:57 AM AEST
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A very wonderfully written and virtuous poem! Since humans are naturally imperfect attempting to create utopia on earth would eventually lead to dystopia. Perhaps God lets that happen so he can save Heaven as utopia or the best for last. Take care and God bless,
Deidra


Re: O Utopia, Utopia, wherefore art thou Utopia? (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 03:03:18 AM AEST
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I have always wondered... can utopia truly exist? If there is no bad... then how do we know what is good? Through the darkness we see the light.




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