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Array ( [sid] => 167470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hurt [time] => 2011-09-24 01:25:49 [hometext] => This one is about people who pretend to be your friends. [bodytext] => I sit here in the dark, hurt and sad from what I've faced.
I've been talked down, hurt by the ones who love to hate.
Hurt by the ones who I kept so close.
Not behind my back, but right in my face.

A joke to them, fun and games.
It hurt me, like the worst kind of ache.
A horrible pain, nothing but sorrow and shame.

I want to be alone now, just leave me be.
"It will make you a man!" Is what they say.
If that's the case, then a man is not what I want to be!

Your so proud with the ugly things you say!
A swollen ego, filled with envy and hate!
Why is it that your so content, with the evil things you say?
Have you no shame?

I thought you were my friends.
All you are is a pack of wolves, hiding in the skin of sheep!
You pretend to be kind, loving, and gentle.
In reality you are hateful, insecure, and fake!

Just leave me alone!
I want nothing to do with you.
You have hurt me for the last time!
I will go my own way, alone, if it's meant to be.

I would rather be alone anyways, than with you.
All you are is fake!
I will pray, not for myself, but for the next victim you choose to take.
May God be with him, so he may endure your fake love, and your oh so real hate!

As for me, I'm fine as long as I'm not next to you, the ones who love to hate!
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Hurt

Contributed by Sirath on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 01:25:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I sit here in the dark, hurt and sad from what I've faced.
I've been talked down, hurt by the ones who love to hate.
Hurt by the ones who I kept so close.
Not behind my back, but right in my face.

A joke to them, fun and games.
It hurt me, like the worst kind of ache.
A horrible pain, nothing but sorrow and shame.

I want to be alone now, just leave me be.
"It will make you a man!" Is what they say.
If that's the case, then a man is not what I want to be!

Your so proud with the ugly things you say!
A swollen ego, filled with envy and hate!
Why is it that your so content, with the evil things you say?
Have you no shame?

I thought you were my friends.
All you are is a pack of wolves, hiding in the skin of sheep!
You pretend to be kind, loving, and gentle.
In reality you are hateful, insecure, and fake!

Just leave me alone!
I want nothing to do with you.
You have hurt me for the last time!
I will go my own way, alone, if it's meant to be.

I would rather be alone anyways, than with you.
All you are is fake!
I will pray, not for myself, but for the next victim you choose to take.
May God be with him, so he may endure your fake love, and your oh so real hate!

As for me, I'm fine as long as I'm not next to you, the ones who love to hate!




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Re: Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 07:38:40 AM AEST
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'Hurt' is a strong poem about a crucial subject -- about which I've much to say. In the lonmg run, it's VERY good to know who your TRUE friend are. In a way it's something to thank G-d for -- since you found out the truth. Better to know --than let them keep hurting you... I bet you suspected all along that these twerps were liars... Anyhow, your words are powerful -- and not at all depressing or even -- to me -- so descriptive of the HURT you feel. Rather I think your resolve. your courage, your positive attitude: these are things that come through in your directly-written words. You have natural ability to write -- such helps in times of stress. Keep writing. Don't take the advice of others -- listen to G-d, Mom, and yourself. Very dynamic poem.

--FlintHunter

Contributed by Sirath on Saturday, September 24 2011 @ 01:25:49 AEST
Topic: 0oops No Topic - General Poetry!


Re: Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 04:35:57 PM AEST
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In this world there are people that are worth your time, and people that aren't. And being able to judge which is which is a very useful talent.




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