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Array ( [sid] => 16738 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Murderous lust [time] => 2003-04-30 00:05:00 [hometext] => Open to all comments and suggestions! [bodytext] => Mist blurs the hills as the limpid sky fades to gray

The moonlight casts a shadow of swirls disappearing into dusk

It was there she saw him

A tall, wide black figure moving towards her

She knew his face

His name...a mystery



She once cried him a river

Slowly, he drowned in the midst of her deep sadness

His return for condemnation

A second chance to lurk out of the crisp dawn below



Seemingly so familiar to her

She lets him reach out to her

He touches her with ice- cold fingertips

Her skin, as soft as rainwater



As he kisses her, he bites till she bleeds

She violently falls to the ground

He glares into the windows of her soul

He then sheds a tear down on her



He cries a river on her

Slowly, she drowns in the midst of his deep anger

He carefully takes her windless body in his arms

Walks away over the misty hills under a once limpid sky

He takes her to a world of sadness and anger

He takes her to a place known as...earth



Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 346 [topic] => 13 [informant] => razorbladerose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Murderous lust

Contributed by razorbladerose on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Mist blurs the hills as the limpid sky fades to gray

The moonlight casts a shadow of swirls disappearing into dusk

It was there she saw him

A tall, wide black figure moving towards her

She knew his face

His name...a mystery



She once cried him a river

Slowly, he drowned in the midst of her deep sadness

His return for condemnation

A second chance to lurk out of the crisp dawn below



Seemingly so familiar to her

She lets him reach out to her

He touches her with ice- cold fingertips

Her skin, as soft as rainwater



As he kisses her, he bites till she bleeds

She violently falls to the ground

He glares into the windows of her soul

He then sheds a tear down on her



He cries a river on her

Slowly, she drowns in the midst of his deep anger

He carefully takes her windless body in his arms

Walks away over the misty hills under a once limpid sky

He takes her to a world of sadness and anger

He takes her to a place known as...earth



Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003




Copyright © razorbladerose ... [ 2003-04-30 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Murderous lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 06:01:20 AM AEST
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dark but beautifully well written..almost mesmerizing.
Shari


Re: Murderous lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Chenobi on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:21:15 AM AEST
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It's beautiful. I was holding my breath while reading.


Re: Murderous lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:39:44 AM AEST
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OMG!! What an incredible poem. Absolutely mesmorizing!! You should be really proud of this!

sleepless_siren


Re: Murderous lust (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:27:37 PM AEST
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WOW!! Powerful write. A bit dark but I liked it just the same. I have to agree too a point. Our world is turning into a crazy place at times.
Michelle


Re: Murderous lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Mosier on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 05:50:24 PM AEST
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Quite nice. I like the ideas and imagry.




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