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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Undiagnosed Schizophrenic
[time] => 2011-08-30 05:37:44
[hometext] => Please comment, i need the feedback!
[bodytext] => We see things, me and her, Things that others can’t see, And when they turn nasty she’s the one to comfort me, She tells me everything will always be alright, When demons come to speak to me late into the night, Sometimes she helps me, she lets me know who’s bad, Which people are nasty, like she did with mam and dad. Although she’s has got the right intentions at heart, She’s constantly watching over me it’s like were never apart, It is uncomfortable at times, As she recites joke after joke, You see it’s my flaws that are the punch lines, She chuckles until she chokes. I hear her laughing, again and again, She lied to me, said she was my friend, She tells me to do things that I don’t want to, Then calls me stupid, a coward, a fool! I don’t really want to hurt people, I don’t really want to be mean, But with her it’s all or nothing you see, There is no in between, In my mind her voice races ahead, She keeps me awake at night, I just lay there motionless in my bed, No matter what I do, She will not leave me alone, I can never think for myself My thoughts are never my own, She makes me cry until my eyes run dry, People look at me and wonder why, Why I laugh to myself, why the pain always shows, Why my eyes show fear deep within my soul, I don't know why others can't hear her taunt me, Her voice is clear and loud but they still can't see, I don't want in my head anymore she's driving me insane, I can't deal with living in this constant pain, She tells me not to trust people i've known for years, It's hard to hear what people are saying as she shouts in my ears, It's been like this for months now and i don't know what to do, She says everybody hates me so theres nobody i can talk to, So as i sit hear her voice chattering in my mind, I stare outside through my long window blinds, I wish i was better and i wish i knew how, How to get this evil out of my mind right now. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nikolejones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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