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Array ( [sid] => 167173 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever [time] => 2011-08-29 22:05:08 [hometext] => i wrote this for my love. i took about 15 minutes to write it and its not done, needs some minor adjustments, but i think its still pretty good as is. comment and let me know what you think. thanks [bodytext] => I love you baby, eternally/
past when time dies at the turn of eternity/
Past when space crumbles and mumbles defeated words to me/
past when all else fails in a hail of truth, you, just turn to me/
give me your hand and trust your man to provide for you a real life/
The past has passed, let it die. now youre mine. dont think twice/
never look back. embrace your fate. every and each night,/
i promise to hold you close, whisper i love you, and squeeze tight/
i'm so in love i cant breath right./
this has to be right. /
your love has wings and it soars in free flight/
above me as my heart screams, baby please, baby please stay with me tonight/
just whisper in my ear baby/
that you have fallen even more and more in love with me lately/
when i'm alone, theres a hole in my soul that keeps gaping/
then i'll grab your hips, electricity flows through our lips. i'm hating/
this fear in the back of my mind that i'll maybe lose you/
i pray that its fake. please lord, look in my heart. the truth you/
see beyond all else, you know i love her, and you know its true. you/
have sent me an angel. beautiful at every angle.
i promise to never let go of this gift. and this love will prevail, cuz its through you./
amen.
forever is such an easy task as long as i have you/
up all night making love then sleep till past 2/
wake up late for work, call me a jerk, and i'll grab you/
pull you back on top of me kiss you and tell you i'm so glad you/
accept me and love me for who i am. baby youre perfect./
i handed you my heart just promise you wont hurt it/
i promise to give you my all, if you promise to accept that you deserve it/
and promise to never let go. because life without you would be worthless/

so baby, when i say "i love you" you need to know how true it is/
how right, how perfect, how strong, how deep. do you see the truth in this?/
anything to make you happy. you want the moon? the moon it is/
anything to see you smile, whisper you love me, and give me one more beautiful kiss/


follow me on this endeavor/
through life as we prove to the world to never say never/
we prove that this love is real, together/
i love you samantha, my angel, my baby girl, my life, my respect, my trust, my heart, my soul, my love... forever. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jstagzsr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Forever

Contributed by jstagzsr on Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 10:05:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I love you baby, eternally/
past when time dies at the turn of eternity/
Past when space crumbles and mumbles defeated words to me/
past when all else fails in a hail of truth, you, just turn to me/
give me your hand and trust your man to provide for you a real life/
The past has passed, let it die. now youre mine. dont think twice/
never look back. embrace your fate. every and each night,/
i promise to hold you close, whisper i love you, and squeeze tight/
i'm so in love i cant breath right./
this has to be right. /
your love has wings and it soars in free flight/
above me as my heart screams, baby please, baby please stay with me tonight/
just whisper in my ear baby/
that you have fallen even more and more in love with me lately/
when i'm alone, theres a hole in my soul that keeps gaping/
then i'll grab your hips, electricity flows through our lips. i'm hating/
this fear in the back of my mind that i'll maybe lose you/
i pray that its fake. please lord, look in my heart. the truth you/
see beyond all else, you know i love her, and you know its true. you/
have sent me an angel. beautiful at every angle.
i promise to never let go of this gift. and this love will prevail, cuz its through you./
amen.
forever is such an easy task as long as i have you/
up all night making love then sleep till past 2/
wake up late for work, call me a jerk, and i'll grab you/
pull you back on top of me kiss you and tell you i'm so glad you/
accept me and love me for who i am. baby youre perfect./
i handed you my heart just promise you wont hurt it/
i promise to give you my all, if you promise to accept that you deserve it/
and promise to never let go. because life without you would be worthless/

so baby, when i say "i love you" you need to know how true it is/
how right, how perfect, how strong, how deep. do you see the truth in this?/
anything to make you happy. you want the moon? the moon it is/
anything to see you smile, whisper you love me, and give me one more beautiful kiss/


follow me on this endeavor/
through life as we prove to the world to never say never/
we prove that this love is real, together/
i love you samantha, my angel, my baby girl, my life, my respect, my trust, my heart, my soul, my love... forever.




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Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 31st August 2011 @ 04:31:16 PM AEST
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I'll follow you after that! lol




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