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Remember, nothing endures forever…
My heart sighs in sadness,
But the visions will not sever.
And now my heart is tainted,
But by something so melodic,
Or madness..?

Oh, but my body yearns so badly..
My soul cries so for your kiss..
While my heart sings so sadly,
Crying for the enchanting touch of your very caress...
How it's etched into my memory,
Engraved into my very soul...
And these longings for you,
I now know, I can no longer control;
For this drug you’ve given me carries me too swiftly,
Towards the very brim of obsession,
Too sweet to calm when you simply kiss me,
Me, merely wishing to be your only possession… [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 14 [informant] => ravenblack_phoenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Obsession & Possession

Contributed by ravenblack_phoenix on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Daydreams of eternal love..
Remember, nothing endures forever…
My heart sighs in sadness,
But the visions will not sever.
And now my heart is tainted,
But by something so melodic,
Or madness..?

Oh, but my body yearns so badly..
My soul cries so for your kiss..
While my heart sings so sadly,
Crying for the enchanting touch of your very caress...
How it's etched into my memory,
Engraved into my very soul...
And these longings for you,
I now know, I can no longer control;
For this drug you’ve given me carries me too swiftly,
Towards the very brim of obsession,
Too sweet to calm when you simply kiss me,
Me, merely wishing to be your only possession…

Copyright Â© ravenblack_phoenix ... [ 2003-04-29 13:05:00]
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Re: Obsession & Possession (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:32:30 PM AEST
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I think this is beautiful
Shari

Re: Obsession & Possession (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 04:34:09 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful...

Re: Obsession & Possession (User Rating: 1 )
by kittiekat on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 03:28:36 PM AEST
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i think this poem is written beautifully and u have a talent for writting poems, it's great!
>^..^<

Re: Obsession & Possession (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:38:13 AM AEST
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That was beautiful great write

Re: Obsession & Possession (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:04:16 PM AEST
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I agree,this poem IS touching...I liked "Towards the very brim of obesession,too sweet to calm when you somply kiss me,Me,merely wishing to be your only posession".....How nicely written..I also liked the "Oh"at the beginning of your second paragraph,it made it seem like you were really longing for that person,like you wanted to pass on but just couldn't.Nicely written Raven,
PumpkinPie

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