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A world where kindess has no way to show through..

Left alone without that push or kind smile..
Sick 'cause you know this isn't some trial..
Every step you take is just one more ignored..
Shadowed by others who were gifted and adored..

How can you compete with beauty and charm?
There's no way to do so without bringing yourself harm..
Can you live in this world that holds so much hate..
Or will you fall from your perch to the horror of fate?

Welcome to Reality.. The world of despair..
A place where no one will truly care..
You're all alone here in this twisted place..
And alone you'll die.. Not leaving a trace.. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 338 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Depression-chan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Welcome To Reality

Contributed by Depression-chan on Friday, 29th July 2011 @ 08:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Imagine a world where no one will know you..
A world where kindess has no way to show through..

Left alone without that push or kind smile..
Sick 'cause you know this isn't some trial..
Every step you take is just one more ignored..
Shadowed by others who were gifted and adored..

How can you compete with beauty and charm?
There's no way to do so without bringing yourself harm..
Can you live in this world that holds so much hate..
Or will you fall from your perch to the horror of fate?

Welcome to Reality.. The world of despair..
A place where no one will truly care..
You're all alone here in this twisted place..
And alone you'll die.. Not leaving a trace..

Copyright © Depression-chan ... [ 2011-07-29 20:40:25]
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Re: Welcome To Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 30th July 2011 @ 07:34:02 PM AEST
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Very deep write.
good work.
Blessings, huggs,
emy

Re: Welcome To Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 02:54:23 AM AEST
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Well the poem definitely fits your profile name lol but don't get so down. Life isn't a competition. My sister once said "There is no such thing as better or worse, everyone is just different." Just try to enjoy life :)

Re: Welcome To Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by philiphemsby on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 03:31:38 PM AEST
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so true bruv

Re: Welcome To Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 08:37:06 AM AEST
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WOW!!! BRAVO~~~!!
Incredibly written, This one screamed brutally out to me to read it and reread it again... It's very seldom that I just go ballistic and have 2 show someone else the poem i read and then comment tooo!! Please Keep writing ,never give up always keep posting &sharing here and everywhere you can...Other poets like myself need a good motivator to sock us up and show us realization!! Your work is absolutely so deep and so true to life, well mine especially right now that it's beauty will last for ages to go!!
Peace!!
HUgz!!
"Dana:"

Re: Welcome To Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Mic-E on Friday, 12th August 2011 @ 05:40:13 PM AEST
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nice write, very deep
keep it up

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