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Array ( [sid] => 166670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In working order [time] => 2011-07-02 01:49:14 [hometext] => I'm a male 19 year old violinist and bodybuilder, I struggle a lot with low self esteem, for some reason I just never feel like I'm good enough that I deserve to be happy... this is my take on myself [bodytext] => Fix it all for perfect
Imperfections go away
We must remain in working order
For the sun will rise each day

And each day the sun shines on us
Earth’s eyes shall lend it’s stare
And with it’s voice proceed to tell us
What is and isn’t there

So fix it all for perfect
So we can shine amongst the stars
Because the heavens wouldn’t permit our tears
Of how broken we truly are
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 61 [informant] => scottstone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

In working order

Contributed by scottstone on Saturday, 2nd July 2011 @ 01:49:14 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Fix it all for perfect
Imperfections go away
We must remain in working order
For the sun will rise each day

And each day the sun shines on us
Earth’s eyes shall lend it’s stare
And with it’s voice proceed to tell us
What is and isn’t there

So fix it all for perfect
So we can shine amongst the stars
Because the heavens wouldn’t permit our tears
Of how broken we truly are

Copyright Â© scottstone ... [ 2011-07-02 01:49:14]
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Re: In working order (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd July 2011 @ 10:06:42 PM AEST
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I hear what ya saying and I know the feeling. It took a long time to find me but I want have it any other way, now.
Now I take it one day at a time.
I still have sad times but I have more good ones.
God led the way and I couldn't take one day with out (God) luv. As far as society gos, Bah humbug,
Life is to short to worry bout what others think.
I live alone with my animals. I live in the country and I'm country cool all the way down to my bare feet.
Hope u find your own inner self again and just be u. huggs, blessings

Re: In working order (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 01:07:48 PM AEST
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Perfection is not perfection, if it doesn't contain happiness.

Something my parents always used to tell me. : )

Coincidentally I am also a violinist. Of 15+ years now.

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