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[aid] => Mick
[title] => who are they?
[time] => 2003-04-28 10:35:00
[hometext] => 'come on, humour me a 'lill lol, who are they?
[bodytext] => they take care of each other
and lend a helping hand
and anytime of day or night
are there to understand,
no matter what the burden
no matter what the pain
inside their heart's are shining
they don't notice any rain,
sometimes there is no question
of who they really are at all
but i will tell you one thing
they will never let you fall.
~*~
it really is kind of uncanny
how they always seem to know
whenever another one of them
has lost his or her creative flow,
before it's even been mentioned
a kind word's there waiting for you
declaring that they care about
all the things you say and do,
sometimes there is no question
of who they really are at all
but i will tell you one thing
they will never let you fall.
~*~
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 213
[topic] => 19
[informant] => ladyfawn
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => InspirationalPoems
)
who are they?
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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they take care of each other
and lend a helping hand
and anytime of day or night
are there to understand,
no matter what the burden
no matter what the pain
inside their heart's are shining
they don't notice any rain,
sometimes there is no question
of who they really are at all
but i will tell you one thing
they will never let you fall.
~*~
it really is kind of uncanny
how they always seem to know
whenever another one of them
has lost his or her creative flow,
before it's even been mentioned
a kind word's there waiting for you
declaring that they care about
all the things you say and do,
sometimes there is no question
of who they really are at all
but i will tell you one thing
they will never let you fall.
~*~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-04-28 10:35:00]
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Re: who are they?
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
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i am reading this too early for riddles but i will go back and read later... good write enjoyable
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Re: who are they?
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by Boopa0213 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:17:43 AM AEST
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| Good poem my guess is a really good friend who is always there for you...write me back and let me know the real answer. |
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Re: who are they?
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:57:09 AM AEST
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I loved this!! I would say maybe its people here on YPDC your referring too??? Let me know
Michelle |
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Re: who are they?
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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What a nice little riddle! I have 2 answers either family or a good friend.
Very nice poem Nessa
Yvonne |
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Re: who are they?
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by spooky on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:40:24 PM AEST
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| i kind of agree,,ypdc writters,,well put in a riddle,,and well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: who are they?
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:02:24 PM AEST
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| Love this poem maam. My guess is a pet or good friend. Same thing I guess. Wonderfully done. |
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Re: who are they?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:51:05 PM AEST
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Great riddle..and my guess would be..friends...but knowing you as I do, I would have to say...your precious dogs...
*Woofie Hugs* and *Drool*
Jenni |
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Re: who are they?
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:53:24 AM AEST
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| US |
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Re: who are they?
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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| i love the poem....are the people ur referring to on ypdc...thats my best guess. |
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Re: who are they?
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:04:29 AM AEST
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im guessing the same as Kenny...ypdc friends...but some people on here know more about you then i do so manybe your doggie...good write either way...dont elave us hanging
Lindsey |
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Re: who are they?
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:20:06 PM AEST
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Humor you...
Ok... But I think you made it either too easy or extremely deceptive....
My guess would be good friends or more to the point A best friend whose shares life's experiences with you. At first I leaned towards parents but something about the poems as it went on seemed to suggest a very close friend or friends.
In any case a very good write. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: who are they?
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by Wilder on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:55:39 PM AEST
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very, very good :o) Good poem. Check mine out if ya want. Keep up the good work!
~ Wilder ~ |
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Re: who are they?
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 04:36:33 PM AEST
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Loved this one. Great job as always.
Jeff |
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Re: who are they?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 07:04:01 AM AEST
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| ahhh this was special:) i was thinking at the time of writing this poem of the love and friendship i/we feel here at ypdc, and the deep caring amongst us; so i think in one form or another most everyone saw too, big woofie hugs n' love always nessa x |
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Re: who are they?
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 10:20:46 PM AEST
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| You and your "big woofie hugs" always get me smiling :))) Great poem and it is so very true ... where would we be without the friendship that flows from this site ... big woofie hugs back to ya ... Jan |
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