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Array ( [sid] => 165801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => yet another miserable,depressing attempt at poetry based on fiction [time] => 2011-04-10 15:50:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Chain on me I fixed myself
for some known reason I need pain
beyond that measured by the flesh
a kind that is deeply engrained
a need to need beyond my own
a need to matter to someone
a need to grieve with gross despair
the minute that they choose they're gone.
I project all my wants and needs
upon a ship that surely sank
emotion perpetually feeds
it's negative. So dark and dank.
Why does a failed relationship
mean an end to everything?
the sun it shines to mock the pain.
Unaware, the birds still sing.
And people who, but for a chance
could be the subject of this rhyme
I never asked them for a dance
maybe there's better luck next time?
But next time means that what just passed
was little more than casual
I thought this time that it would last
all at once a broken spell
I hope that it was not just me
that despaired at what went wrong
I don't blame you, though it hurts like hell
Goodbye.
I wish you well.......
So long! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 100 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poeticjestix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

yet another miserable,depressing attempt at poetry based on fiction

Contributed by poeticjestix on Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 03:50:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Chain on me I fixed myself
for some known reason I need pain
beyond that measured by the flesh
a kind that is deeply engrained
a need to need beyond my own
a need to matter to someone
a need to grieve with gross despair
the minute that they choose they're gone.
I project all my wants and needs
upon a ship that surely sank
emotion perpetually feeds
it's negative. So dark and dank.
Why does a failed relationship
mean an end to everything?
the sun it shines to mock the pain.
Unaware, the birds still sing.
And people who, but for a chance
could be the subject of this rhyme
I never asked them for a dance
maybe there's better luck next time?
But next time means that what just passed
was little more than casual
I thought this time that it would last
all at once a broken spell
I hope that it was not just me
that despaired at what went wrong
I don't blame you, though it hurts like hell
Goodbye.
I wish you well.......
So long!

Copyright © poeticjestix ... [ 2011-04-10 15:50:32]
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Re: yet another miserable,depressing attempt at poetry based on fiction (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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Well done. blessings,
emy

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