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[aid] => mick
[title] => abrupt
[time] => 2011-03-31 12:05:13
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[bodytext] => She holds his hand so gently the feeling is so warm tears hid, but there are plenty right now they just won't form he hesitates so badly she chokes upon her words her face looks up so sadly no longer bee's and birds he pleads but she is steadfast he says something to hurt he can't believe it is past so he dishes out the dirt her hand lets go, he stutters her fury now unleashed the beauty puts up shutters and turns into a beast he stands up sharp and blisters. The insult of this scene! rehearsed with help of sisters feels sick, it is obscene her cool is lost how dare he! React, this awful way her mind made up so swiftly "take you back! No way". And so he leaves in tears and she stands off so cold to the pub he steers no glitter and no gold an argument later breaks a victim at the bar next morn her new love awakes and puffs on a cigar... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 136 [topic] => 22 [informant] => poeticjestix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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