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Looking out a broken window at fences that never fall

My hands bleed as I try to break and run
I am pushed back to the nowhere I had begun

Time ceases to move as I bend under my load
Like driving for hours together on an empty road

The pain is numbing every ache I had
As I watched my every cherished dream go bad

A worn out heart that has bled too much
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A WORN OUT HEART...

Contributed by pooja on Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 04:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Sinking in a hell hole, I still wanna damn it all
Looking out a broken window at fences that never fall

My hands bleed as I try to break and run
I am pushed back to the nowhere I had begun

Time ceases to move as I bend under my load
Like driving for hours together on an empty road

The pain is numbing every ache I had
As I watched my every cherished dream go bad

A worn out heart that has bled too much
It shrinks and shrivels at every gentle touch...

Copyright © pooja ... [ 2011-03-13 04:31:07]
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by mehuel on Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 05:08:16 AM AEST
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very touching, especially the ending..

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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I can relate.great job here.
Blessings, huggs,
emy

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 02:35:08 AM AEST
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Very nice poem. I feel you in every way. I once had a heart like this. It took mine six years to heal. Now I'm about to be married for the second time after a nine year absence without love

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:13:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful baring of the soul, empathic words that resound in depth and sensitivity.

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Wednesday, 8th June 2011 @ 02:32:47 PM AEST
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The poem really tells me you're hurting and hope it will all end.

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 02:37:15 PM AEST
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so sad... so beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: A WORN OUT HEART... (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 17th June 2018 @ 05:06:26 AM AEST
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I can feel the anguish in this flow
well done....

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