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With a limped stride
Much like her feelings
She had once known
As her own pride
She's a victim
To Social Judgment
Social Stigma
and undermining
Why can't one person
see her for whom
she truly is? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 66 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Victim

Contributed by xHeathenx on Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:10:14 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Broken she walks
With a limped stride
Much like her feelings
She had once known
As her own pride
She's a victim
To Social Judgment
Social Stigma
and undermining
Why can't one person
see her for whom
she truly is?

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2011-01-14 01:10:14]
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Re: Victim (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:15:02 PM AEST
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Your poem, its very meaningful.. it's lovely has deep emotion in it. I can connect with it.
Beautiful write!

Re: Victim (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 12:21:08 AM AEST
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Sadly no one can escape judgment in life, especially those unfortunate enough to stand out from the norm. Life can be cruel to some, but finding something to love can ebb that pain.

Re: Victim (User Rating: 1 )
by OnceAnAngel on Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:28:58 AM AEST
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maybe bec everyone's busy to care. or maybe its easy to judge?

Re: Victim (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 03:06:18 AM AEST
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Because they suck? I was answering this: Why can't one person see her for whom she truly is? I really like the way you tied in her feelings with her physical characteristics of limping. I think there is at least one person out there that can see us for who we really are, unfortunately, it's just finding that person that can prove difficult. Great poem. Thank you for an enjoyable read. Tim

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