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My whole body aches with freedom,
The snow capped mountain, the jewel in the crown of my being.
My wings are vibrant, my each feather a string on a harp
Tenderly plucked by the wind.
My eyes are shiny, more precious than pearls
Laying undiscovered on the ocean floor.
And here I sit at the twiggy window of my tree top mansion
Looking down on the winter wood
Hushed by snow and dreaming of the spring to come.
And I see there on the foothill of my mind,
My image engraved in frost, a testament to my evolution.
I shake the frost from my breast, spread my wings,
Feel the rush of the wind beneath,
Higher and higher, hovering above the valley,
The crowned monarch of my kingdom.
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I am Perfection, I am Kite.

Contributed by cashfan1 on Monday, 3rd January 2011 @ 03:14:49 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

I am perfection, made so by creation,
My whole body aches with freedom,
The snow capped mountain, the jewel in the crown of my being.
My wings are vibrant, my each feather a string on a harp
Tenderly plucked by the wind.
My eyes are shiny, more precious than pearls
Laying undiscovered on the ocean floor.
And here I sit at the twiggy window of my tree top mansion
Looking down on the winter wood
Hushed by snow and dreaming of the spring to come.
And I see there on the foothill of my mind,
My image engraved in frost, a testament to my evolution.
I shake the frost from my breast, spread my wings,
Feel the rush of the wind beneath,
Higher and higher, hovering above the valley,
The crowned monarch of my kingdom.
For I am perfection, I am Kite.

Copyright © cashfan1 ... [ 2011-01-03 03:14:49]
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Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Monday, 3rd January 2011 @ 03:33:03 AM AEST
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very nice. Perspective poems are hard to write...good one.

Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Monday, 3rd January 2011 @ 11:55:18 PM AEST
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well captured Dennis esp like the line..... my wings are.......by the wind, expressive in detail such that we see what you see.

Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by Brianimal on Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 04:41:09 AM AEST
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Kite is ALIVE!

Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 07:40:05 AM AEST
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Just come back from Lampetr and it's always a pleasure to watch the Kites soaring over your southern valleys and you've captured their majesty beautifully.

mat.

Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 10:58:36 AM AEST
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Makes me want to fly one...way to hook us!

ming

Re: I am Perfection, I am Kite. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 02:14:44 AM AEST
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You paint a panoramic view with your words. I love it!!!

Thank you for posting it.

Tim

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