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Array ( [sid] => 164013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Monday Funeral [time] => 2010-12-30 20:44:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Ignoring wrists and razors for another Monday
That lonely commute inches you closer to stems
Frozen in traffic your sun is back with a fever
Suited to their specifications and all tied up
This drab shimmer has you pondering is this it
Sipping stale coffee while pretending to care
The possessed smell of cabbage seeps through
Timely spells wishing hands to move in haste
The boss does a drive by to check your pulse
Leaning on a framed crutch thinking of umbrellas
You’re a 9 to 5 dreamer flipping off expectations
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Monday Funeral

Contributed by duff on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 08:44:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Ignoring wrists and razors for another Monday
That lonely commute inches you closer to stems
Frozen in traffic your sun is back with a fever
Suited to their specifications and all tied up
This drab shimmer has you pondering is this it
Sipping stale coffee while pretending to care
The possessed smell of cabbage seeps through
Timely spells wishing hands to move in haste
The boss does a drive by to check your pulse
Leaning on a framed crutch thinking of umbrellas
You’re a 9 to 5 dreamer flipping off expectations




Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-12-30 20:44:40]
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Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 08:50:38 PM AEST
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Huh.. I like it. I don't read much of your writing (usually you have comments, and I try to get to the 0 comments poems first), but i think i'll start reading more.


Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 10:30:25 PM AEST
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Very interesting. About everything and about nothing. I like how you constructed the whole poem. The ending sealed the deal. Nice!


Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 02:16:06 AM AEST
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hi duff,
nice write, you've just described one of my personal hells,you've captured the monotony of 9 to 5 and what can be every day life.

mat.


Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:01:19 PM AEST
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Very interesting the way you wrote this.
Good work.
Blessings,
emy
Happy New Year.


Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 06:01:02 AM AEST
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Duff
your creativity is flowing nicely. A great start to 2011. I look forward to the year ahead filled with more of your work. Well done.


Re: Monday Funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 12:29:00 AM AEST
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i sooo love this, your style and grace are a gentle
refreshing reality, i could have read on and on, it is
captivating........

hugs n' love nessa

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