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Dark eyes lined with black mystery

Porcelain skin gliding in kimono sway

A naked flame writing off all prerequisites

Silk midnight resting on smooth shoulders

Fixated and searching for a glance to share

I slowly walk through spirits to breathe it in

Her essence daring my lips to wander home

Before I could speak she softly whispered

That moment bought us an eternity to spend
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That Night

Contributed by duff on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 11:32:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Behind the smoke I watched her rise

Dark eyes lined with black mystery

Porcelain skin gliding in kimono sway

A naked flame writing off all prerequisites

Silk midnight resting on smooth shoulders

Fixated and searching for a glance to share

I slowly walk through spirits to breathe it in

Her essence daring my lips to wander home

Before I could speak she softly whispered

That moment bought us an eternity to spend

Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-12-08 11:32:59]
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Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 01:53:35 PM AEST
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This poem gives off a sense of mystery as well as beauty. I love it.

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 03:15:46 PM AEST
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Very sweet.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ari_monster on Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST
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aww, this poem
is beautiful, sweet, and mysterious

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:17:59 AM AEST
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such a beauty, without rhyme it still holds the flow...
love it as ever...
Take care
Anbarean

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:10:43 PM AEST
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Some mystery and some temptation is what I'm picking up. Nice.

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 11:19:01 PM AEST
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has a very surreal feel to it...nicely done!

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 03:07:13 AM AEST
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beautiful and sexy

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Njd1105 on Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:16:44 AM AEST
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Awesome.
Love your work.

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:36:30 AM AEST
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Wow! And again...wow! Can I steal this line?

'Dark eyes lined with black mystery' (J/K)

love this...

ming

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