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[sid] => 163449
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => This Past Hour or So
[time] => 2010-11-28 00:31:17
[hometext] => I want to know if anyone can tell what this poem is about. (If I am clear enough.) Can you tell me what is going on in my life? Just curious. My dream is to become a doctor.
[bodytext] => i am sick mentally sick with the thing called love. i am overwhelmed please will you make it stop? it's my medicine though. the things are going too quickly. everything is blamed on everything it's always nothing's fault. my days: already done my days: never begun in the mirror: who is that? no idea. ever. all my actions, why do i? relax, calm, pet the Jack Russell on the living room carpet in a patch of sun. with her collar off. eat some breakfast. take a shower. pick up your room, and begin studying. go to church? no. it's still too early things are too good to be true. things are too bad to be forgiven. still i know who God is at least and we have infinite love it is taken advantage of completely. what will teach me? what tragedy will happen? my essence of self is strong but then it is immediately weakened by love. new friends? yes new friends? too much effort. be productive? yes be productive? too much effort. everything is too balanced. pick up your head swallow your pride look forward make friends work hard enjoy it become a doctor for yourself [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => theancientone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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