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Dirty blues in his brain
A dusty lamp swings
Murder and a radio's tune
Families favorites splayed
Stitched pleasure psychopath
Come and get him detective
Photographs black and white
Channel five plays his song
Blood bodies mind control
Proud dangerous wicked DNA
Follow catch shackle smart
Evil damned a killer cuts
The devil’s tambourine in his head
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Serial Killer

Contributed by duff on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 09:43:15 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Scalpel methodical man
Dirty blues in his brain
A dusty lamp swings
Murder and a radio's tune
Families favorites splayed
Stitched pleasure psychopath
Come and get him detective
Photographs black and white
Channel five plays his song
Blood bodies mind control
Proud dangerous wicked DNA
Follow catch shackle smart
Evil damned a killer cuts
The devil’s tambourine in his head




Copyright © duff ... [ 2010-11-20 09:43:15]
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Re: Serial Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 09:46:20 AM AEST
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a very different way of writing...I like the way you shape and wrap it up and make it well...

Anbarean


Re: Serial Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by xxPullMyStringsxx on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:37:34 PM AEST
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I looove the last line, this poem is totally wicked!


Re: Serial Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:41:01 PM AEST
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Well done. It sounds like my tv looks when I have to change channels.
Still it's great writing and nothing personal on your write.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Serial Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st April 2011 @ 07:55:25 AM AEST
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hmmm, dirty blues and the devil's tambourine...like it. the last line is really great. well done.




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