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[aid] => mick
[title] => Lovely Storm
[time] => 2010-11-02 15:07:55
[hometext] => Hi guys, this is my first poem that I have submitted and will probably be my last. This poem took me awhile to write, although short, it contains a lot of emotions, so If everyone could give me feedback about how they felt about this piece, thanks!
[bodytext] => Like light and dark which creates a spark, that burns ever so brightly.
Through thick and thin , the wind that howls will not put this candle out.
After the rain has cleared all that remains is sunshine...
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Lovely Storm
Contributed by
jemahk
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 03:07:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like light and dark which creates a spark, that burns ever so brightly.
Through thick and thin , the wind that howls will not put this candle out.
After the rain has cleared all that remains is sunshine...
Copyright ©
jemahk
... [
2010-11-02 15:07:55]
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Re: Lovely Storm
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 03:15:51 PM AEST
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Well it's good writing.
I could feel determination when I read it.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lovely Storm
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 10:34:00 PM AEST
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| I love the one you write but i don't want it to be the last...keep up the good work and thanks for sharing a nice one. |
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Re: Lovely Storm
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 03:21:44 PM AEST
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Perhaps you underestimate your own ability.
Why let this be the last ?
Why not let yourself become immersed in this wonderful community of poetry?
Keep writing.
Steve |
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Re: Lovely Storm
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by 2bpositive on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 04:37:46 AM AEST
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great write. Better than my first. It show optimism, positivity, and brings alot of light to share.
Keep up the good work.
I really want to read more.
So keep writing!
2bpositive |
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