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Array ( [sid] => 162614 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgotten [time] => 2010-10-03 07:48:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I hope you remember me
I hope you forget me
I hope you’re someone different now

I hope you find yourself
Staring at nothing
Trying to find my face,
Wondering where you’ve seen it before

I hope I pass you on the way to somewhere
And I look familiar
But you can’t remember my name

I hope you wake up in the middle of the night
Disturbed inside, terrified of remembering
More than nothing

I hope you tuck me away
So far in the back of the cave
Dust, cobwebs, forgotten,
Leaving only my skeleton

Put me in a box
Labeled “do not open”
Trap me inside
So you don’t feel a thing

Because that’s what I’m doing
It’s all I can,
This cold loneliness I call home now
But I can barely remember your face [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forgotten

Contributed by Chamaron on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:48:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I hope you remember me
I hope you forget me
I hope you’re someone different now

I hope you find yourself
Staring at nothing
Trying to find my face,
Wondering where you’ve seen it before

I hope I pass you on the way to somewhere
And I look familiar
But you can’t remember my name

I hope you wake up in the middle of the night
Disturbed inside, terrified of remembering
More than nothing

I hope you tuck me away
So far in the back of the cave
Dust, cobwebs, forgotten,
Leaving only my skeleton

Put me in a box
Labeled “do not open”
Trap me inside
So you don’t feel a thing

Because that’s what I’m doing
It’s all I can,
This cold loneliness I call home now
But I can barely remember your face

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2010-10-03 07:48:23]
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Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 10:29:58 AM AEST
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Oh god this so amazing one you write. I can feel the pain in it and I love it. Great work keep it up.

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 11:46:46 AM AEST
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My gosh. This.Is.Just.Brillaint!

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Rykor on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 01:10:34 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece of work! You make the reader actually feel the emotions you are experiencing!

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 08:09:31 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Bet this one released much frustration.
Awesome.
blessings,
emy

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 04:51:40 AM AEST
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yours word capture the emotion so honestly, you have painted a state of mind that you, i and i am sure many others have felt and experienced... thank you

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