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You keep my spirits high
And when the night falls
It's your star that shines brightest of all

When I am lost and all alone
When I feel trapped and on my own
I look up above
And see your star that's filled with love

When I'm in trouble I turn to you
This is something I can't deny
I tell you everything I'm going through
Because you're my star in the sky

You can't talk but you hear
All my dreams and all my fears
Even though you're now gone
Your star still drives me on

When I need belief, when I need hope
You give me strength so I can cope
Even if I never try
You'll always be my star in the sky

I know one day when we meet again
I will shine, I'll be the same
Forever in my eyes
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MY STAR IN THE SKY

Contributed by chrisdavid on Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 01:10:07 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You're my star in the sky
You keep my spirits high
And when the night falls
It's your star that shines brightest of all

When I am lost and all alone
When I feel trapped and on my own
I look up above
And see your star that's filled with love

When I'm in trouble I turn to you
This is something I can't deny
I tell you everything I'm going through
Because you're my star in the sky

You can't talk but you hear
All my dreams and all my fears
Even though you're now gone
Your star still drives me on

When I need belief, when I need hope
You give me strength so I can cope
Even if I never try
You'll always be my star in the sky

I know one day when we meet again
I will shine, I'll be the same
Forever in my eyes
You're my star in the sky

Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-09-30 01:10:07]
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Re: MY STAR IN THE SKY (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 12:21:56 AM AEST
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Very beautiful write, my friend.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: MY STAR IN THE SKY (User Rating: 1 )
by nrazak1 on Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:33:32 PM AEST
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That was very touching. Made me tear up. :)
Very good!. Keep up the good work!
-Naadiya

Re: MY STAR IN THE SKY (User Rating: 1 )
by williamdye on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 09:05:29 AM AEST
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I liked this.

Re: MY STAR IN THE SKY (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:11:15 AM AEST
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I think that many of us have a "star in the sky." nice write.

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