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Array ( [sid] => 16247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Take my angel, and watch the devil take over [time] => 2003-04-19 20:25:00 [hometext] => written for my best friend when she was supposed to be moving to Ohio earlier than expected. She is still moving but at least now I have more time with my angel. [bodytext] => I have no more tears left.
It feels so unreal to me.
Why are you moving, stranding me?
I do not look forward to life now,
It will no longer be a breeze.
It will once again be full of conflicts and
hate towards everyone that I see.

Cold chills run through my body
That's the only thing I can feel
I punch the wall continuesly but no pain comes from it
I fall to the floor, hand covered in blood
The tears begin to flow, seems as if there's no stopping them
I question God, my whole body is now trembling
I'd rather be dead than having my best friend taken from me
My eyes are sore, my hand is swelling
Go ahead and take her, she was all I had anyways
Take my angel away from me
And watch the devil take over. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Gin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Take my angel, and watch the devil take over

Contributed by Gin on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I have no more tears left.
It feels so unreal to me.
Why are you moving, stranding me?
I do not look forward to life now,
It will no longer be a breeze.
It will once again be full of conflicts and
hate towards everyone that I see.

Cold chills run through my body
That's the only thing I can feel
I punch the wall continuesly but no pain comes from it
I fall to the floor, hand covered in blood
The tears begin to flow, seems as if there's no stopping them
I question God, my whole body is now trembling
I'd rather be dead than having my best friend taken from me
My eyes are sore, my hand is swelling
Go ahead and take her, she was all I had anyways
Take my angel away from me
And watch the devil take over.

Copyright © Gin ... [ 2003-04-19 20:25:00]
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Re: Take my angel, and watch the devil take over (User Rating: 1 )
by Fudge on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 06:55:14 AM AEST
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good poem. well done. i am in the same boat as you. if you like you can see my poem called My Dear and some lyrics called Here With You, about my best friend who's moving away. Never lose hope of seeing her again. It's not impossible.

Re: Take my angel, and watch the devil take over (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 10:31:33 AM AEST
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Angels come and angels go
There's no such thing as the last angel.
Look around...You'll see what I mean

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