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Array ( [sid] => 162365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beads of Blood [time] => 2010-09-18 17:30:26 [hometext] => this happens to much in our country [bodytext] => Drip, Drip, Drip
Blood drops to the floor
My skin busts open every time he hits me
It hurts so much
But i have become so addicted
When he hits me it brings me back
Back from a world that I've created
Created to block out the awful truth of my life
Where I'm beaten and called horrible names

Drip, Drip, Drip
My tears drop to the floor
Save me from this torture
Save me from this home which is not a home
Save me from my life before I take it myself

Step, Step, Step
Here he comes
I don't know if i can stand this much longer
He comes closer
He yells and slaps my face
I try to run I try to scream but he's to fast

Drop
My lifeless body falls to the floor
No one tried to see
No one tried to help
It's no use now because I'm free
Free of him and the awful names
I'm free of this wretched life
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Beads of Blood

Contributed by theunknown on Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 05:30:26 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Drip, Drip, Drip
Blood drops to the floor
My skin busts open every time he hits me
It hurts so much
But i have become so addicted
When he hits me it brings me back
Back from a world that I've created
Created to block out the awful truth of my life
Where I'm beaten and called horrible names

Drip, Drip, Drip
My tears drop to the floor
Save me from this torture
Save me from this home which is not a home
Save me from my life before I take it myself

Step, Step, Step
Here he comes
I don't know if i can stand this much longer
He comes closer
He yells and slaps my face
I try to run I try to scream but he's to fast

Drop
My lifeless body falls to the floor
No one tried to see
No one tried to help
It's no use now because I'm free
Free of him and the awful names
I'm free of this wretched life




Copyright © theunknown ... [ 2010-09-18 17:30:26]
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Re: Beads of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 05:55:30 PM AEST
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Don't wait for death to make you 'free'.....just pack a bag and simply flee.


Re: Beads of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by tinybitinsane on Sunday, 19th September 2010 @ 03:39:30 PM AEST
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i love this but i agree with ^him/her^ if u dont like wats goin on in ur life.. Change it


Re: Beads of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 09:28:07 PM AEST
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Deep InnerVision of real pain and agony


Re: Beads of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:25:00 PM AEST
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So sad, but I'm glad you can at least have writing as an escape.
You're strong and beautiful... You can be on to something so much better. Please get out, before it's too late.




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