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Array ( [sid] => 162327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No one else... [time] => 2010-09-15 17:26:53 [hometext] => To my first love... [bodytext] => they couldn't understand,
how i could just walk up and take your hand,
and instantly know,
i loved you and we needed each other to grow,
and to move along-
but b/c of them,
i decided to be strong-
so i pushed you away,
without trying to explain,
when you were gone,
i just didn't feel the same-
and i always told you,
we'd be back together someday,
but somehow you knew,
tomorrow may not always come through,
and you swore i'd realize,
that you were the one,
b/c for some reason we both knew,
we were each other's first love-
without saying a word,
though love is sometimes blind-
it's always heard,
no matter how many times you deny it,
and flip the bird.
so i tried to hate you but it didn't work,
all i accomplished,
was making us both hurt-
and you refused to believe,
i could live with myself if i made you leave,
and what was funny about it all,
was the fact that you knew i did fall,
and i was annoyed b/c i cared to much about what other's thought,
and at the time pushing you aside,
seemed better than getting caught.
maybe i broke our hearts,
to prove to myself,
if we were apart,
it would be hell,
and that i truely did need just you-
and no one else........ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => pinkunicornoctober [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

No one else...

Contributed by pinkunicornoctober on Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 05:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

they couldn't understand,
how i could just walk up and take your hand,
and instantly know,
i loved you and we needed each other to grow,
and to move along-
but b/c of them,
i decided to be strong-
so i pushed you away,
without trying to explain,
when you were gone,
i just didn't feel the same-
and i always told you,
we'd be back together someday,
but somehow you knew,
tomorrow may not always come through,
and you swore i'd realize,
that you were the one,
b/c for some reason we both knew,
we were each other's first love-
without saying a word,
though love is sometimes blind-
it's always heard,
no matter how many times you deny it,
and flip the bird.
so i tried to hate you but it didn't work,
all i accomplished,
was making us both hurt-
and you refused to believe,
i could live with myself if i made you leave,
and what was funny about it all,
was the fact that you knew i did fall,
and i was annoyed b/c i cared to much about what other's thought,
and at the time pushing you aside,
seemed better than getting caught.
maybe i broke our hearts,
to prove to myself,
if we were apart,
it would be hell,
and that i truely did need just you-
and no one else........

Copyright © pinkunicornoctober ... [ 2010-09-15 17:26:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No one else... (User Rating: 1 )
by CarrieLindeman on Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 05:25:04 PM AEST
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I really really liked your poem. I liked the natural flow of your words and the relatability :))

Re: No one else... (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 04:40:48 AM AEST
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This is a shame. From what I gather you were more concerned about what your friends thought and so chose to abandon this guy against your real feelings for him. A little sad but worded nicely.
Take care, Chris.

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