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hypnotizes
the soul.
Cottonly clouds quietly colliding
carrying
dreams.
Subtle raindrops drip drop
releasing
subconscious sorrow.
The voice of sleep
whispers.
Quiet murmurs of calm
reverberate
in the dreamer's psyche.
I long for the time again
when I can hear
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Sleep's Voice

Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 03:58:27 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

The sound of inner peace
hypnotizes
the soul.
Cottonly clouds quietly colliding
carrying
dreams.
Subtle raindrops drip drop
releasing
subconscious sorrow.
The voice of sleep
whispers.
Quiet murmurs of calm
reverberate
in the dreamer's psyche.
I long for the time again
when I can hear
sleep's voice!

Copyright © lesoleilnoire ... [ 2010-07-14 03:58:27]
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Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by andrewjones12 on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 08:52:28 AM AEST
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the sound of inner peace hypnotizes the soul(to me means that stage right before rm sleep) cottonly clouds quietly colliding(to me, sounds like your bed turning into a haven for dreaming to take place) now your dreaming, but subconsciously in sorrow because you know you'll have to wake up eventually. then sleep whispering to you that its okay to wake, for it will return again someday and reverberate with its fimilar expereinces. and the end is blataint. im tired to=). but this is what i felt about this wonderful, even calming to me, peice.
very beautiful.
-andrew
oh and p.s. awsome repititon

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 09:49:27 AM AEST
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When I read your poem, I saw great depth and a chemistry with words.

You also have an artistic flair in your imagery. And, suddenly a dot of paint - isn't a dot of paint at all but a Monet. I say this for very few could write of insomnia and make it artistic and poetic.

Kye-

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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this is so well writen, every word of every stanza flows off the page giving the reader a rare insight to this terrible problem. well done.

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 03:14:45 AM AEST
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This is as cool as they come !
Your poem itself has a hypnotic quality ! Ironically, like a beautiful lullaby :)
A very reverberating poem. Great job !

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by myworld on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 03:54:10 AM AEST
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Nice piece,
Very gentle and easy to read, but has this calming effect.
Thank you :)

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:23:41 AM AEST
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a take on days'dark release guaranteed to make the reader swoon. Nicely done.

Spike

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by slay797 on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 11:42:14 PM AEST
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so soothing, read it just after i changed my theme to light blue so it meshed perfectly haha dunno if its a coincidence but that was perfect

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:43:11 AM AEST
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In Trine,
with the skies the earth and your soul

Re: Sleep's Voice (User Rating: 1 )
by asmith71291 on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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You almost taunt with the hypnotic quality of sleep's voice. This is fantastic.

Alexis

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